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Robert

dear Robert, much-loved friend of ours intellectually gifted reciting Bellman Songs for hours radiant and with voice lifted intellectually gifted you lacked the talent to survive radiant and with voice lifted you left this world with forty-five you lacked the talent to survive too much fervour, too much wine you left this world with forty-five ignoring you were on the line too much fervour, too much wine farewell scene with long smile knowing ignoring you were on the line you went and left us plenty owing farewell scene with long smile knowing reciting Bellman Songs for hours you went and left us plenty owing dear Robert, much-loved friend of ours A RHYMING PANTOUM OF FIVE STANZAS Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS May 10, 2022

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Date: 6/6/2022 7:47:00 AM
Anton, congratulations on your win in the contest! Your words resonated for me how my brother died when he was 45....they could have been the same person. :)Paulette
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:50:00 AM
Thank you for your friendly comment, Paulette. Sad to hear you lost your brother. Robert wrote really good poems. All the best!
Date: 6/4/2022 8:02:00 AM
This tribute to Robert kept climbing my chart, Anton. Certainly worthy of this placement in my contest. Thanks for sharing it. Congratulations!
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Anton Bradinger
Date: 6/24/2022 7:47:00 AM
Thank you, Milton! Your comments always bolster me.

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