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Road-Side Test

There was once an old boozer named Dale Who guzzled copious pints of ale Although he tried his best He flunked the road-side test And was remanded sans bail to jail

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/3/2023 8:19:00 PM

The old boozer Dale was such a fool - Not adhering to the golden rule - To be staying alive - One must not drink and drive - For drunken dudes Shanks’s pony is cool.……. Belle

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/6/2023 11:18:00 AM

Belle, I love your poetical reply. You should post this one - I think it would get a good reception by soupers Bob

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/3/2023 6:52:00 PM

Perfect, my friend. I say that because you are not a comment collector. Well how do we know who is? Those who read you,drop you like a dead skunk all of a sudden. Don’t know we have feelings? Panagiota

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/3/2023 3:27:00 AM

... got what he deserved ... great, Bob :) - hugs

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/3/2023 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. Great to hear from you and best to you - Bob H

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/2/2023 6:46:00 PM

drinking and driving never mixed, well done Robert.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/3/2023 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, Mystic and what you say is so true. Have a wonderful 4th - Bob

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/2/2023 4:51:00 PM

Good one, Bob! I enjoyed…

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/2/2023 4:51:00 PM

Thanks, Ilene. I like to write lims and hope to come up with more. Happy Fourth - Bob

Michael Tor

Date: 7/2/2023 2:57:00 PM

Lol Robert I know a few that have followed in his footsteps. Hope you are well my friend. Have to really catch up on your lovely Poetry. God bless you...

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/2/2023 4:49:00 PM

Thank you, Michael for your kind comments and continued support. Best on you and keep well. Bob H