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Rivers of Time

Relentlessly time marches on leaving behind the marks of age deepening grooves in ones face wrinkles cover hands like cracks. Skin sagging forming wing bats that so unsightly flap about. Hair thinning and lacks in lustre gone the gorgeous locks of yore. Feet that shuffle rather than march failing eyesight with cloudy vision. Movements so slow nowadays, tasks that take three times longer to complete. Yet experiences from our youth stand us in good stead. We find ways of coping. Knowing all the while that soon it will end and we will join our loved ones in afterlife.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/19/2017 3:36:00 PM
So nicely written, Shadow,, describes me an i think a million other women... I hate getting old Hugs
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Date: 1/18/2017 4:29:00 PM
Very true Shadow its life x
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Date: 1/11/2017 10:25:00 PM
Haha, it catches us all, doesn't it! I love the shuffling feet. /|\
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Date: 1/8/2017 5:11:00 PM
Rather sad, Shadow. I hope all is well with you at the moment and you are not overly dejected ...Life can be a tiring experience at times with its constant ups and downs. All my very best as always...And my warmest wishes! :) john
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/9/2017 1:36:00 AM
not at all John in great spirits. This is inspired by a friend who wrote a poem called Ravages of My Face. I just ran with a similar theme hugs

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