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River's Journey

River’s Journey She flowed from up there Rising up and falling down~~~ Over stones and rocks Excitement carrying her along…. Down and down she came Carrying water in her bosom Quenching the thirst Of all coming her way Little seeds flourished Little plants grew Little animals survived Little fish swam along Life was renewed~ All over the plain Birds came from far and wide To partake in its bounty And I waited!!!!!!!! My whole water body Tensed in expectation Awaiting her arrival And there she was Gorgeous as the sky above Rushing towards me Excitement in the air I opened my bosom In she came…… Deep, deep went she Becoming one with me And there she rests After a long journey Closing her eyes To a life ,of peace. Tahera Mannan 03/06/2011 For Constance’s ‘Write me a rippling stream’ contest

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:43:00 AM
superb, tahera.. congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement tahera. A very nice write.
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Tahera
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Date: 6/6/2011 7:04:00 AM
Vivid imagery here Tahera...Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:28:00 PM
Congratulations Tahera on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:01:00 PM
another gem, tahera! congrats with huggs, hon! :)
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:49:00 PM
Congrats Tahera on your wonderful exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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