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River Styx

Alone on the river Styx untouchable by experience in reach of warm safety a reward constantly carroting the current icy morrow my solo journey exciting lack grey and without embrace without redemption without nature away from god

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/24/2016 11:53:00 PM

Enjoyed very much this poem Timothy. Welcome to Poetry Soup.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/23/2016 11:35:00 AM

Push the boatman overboard and row yourself ashore. This reader don't believe in a sadistic God. Good write and congrats. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2016 12:53:00 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Timothy :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2016 9:37:00 PM

Timothy, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Timothy Barry
Date: 3/13/2016 12:36:00 PM

Thanks Skat.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2016 7:07:00 PM

A great first offering!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2016 7:07:00 PM

Welcome to the soup.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2016 12:43:00 PM

Timothy, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@