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River In Spring

The rivers must have stories to tell of years that they have seen life go by. Rabbits that frequent the shores and ducks that quack their way through! my shoes have left imprints on the ground due to rains from night before. Scent of flowers in the morning fresh air attracts lovers from all species around! life’s drama on shore desire to procreate more trees breeze scents encore Written 20/03/2021 Springtime Haibun M.L. Kaiser prose part 67 syllables haiku 5,7 5

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Date: 4/19/2021 8:11:00 AM
Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Spring is a time for renewal and new life. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/19/2021 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Sara! 15 on the list but that is better than N/A! Happy it was placed
Date: 3/23/2021 6:04:00 PM
Lovely Haibun! Very original about rivers telling stories - life’s drama. Best ~ Mala
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/26/2021 7:27:00 AM
thanks Mala. most civilisations grew next to the river from Pharos to Moses and to this day!

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