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For the swine shall arise from the river of fire armed with the hammer of scornful desire seeking to feast in its blood thirsty rage on the meek and the feeble the weakened of age From his black soulless eyes to his char crusted snout alas he emerges to trample about fanning his flames he shall rise ever higher this aching unquenchable belly of fire All that remains in the wake of his gorge are the bloody and broken his hammer will forge wildly swung with a feverish scorn as the people will wail of remorse as they mourn While the temperature rises still higher and higher Be but warned of your burning desire death and destruction is all we acquire when the swine shall arise from the river of fire

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Date: 12/4/2021 11:30:00 AM
I do agree! Kudos on both poem and photo! Aloha!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/4/2021 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Rico
Date: 11/30/2021 2:06:00 PM
wow! This is the first time I've visited your page Jeannie, powerful poem, I'll be back. I really liked the graphic you chose. Bill
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/30/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Bill, the graphic was a recent picture I took of my fire pit. Glad you enjoyed the write.
Date: 11/27/2021 3:08:00 PM
Fascinating! I thorough enjoyed your poem, Jeannie. I found it to be prophetic in nature; as a result, a bit chilling. Good writing!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 11/27/2021 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, it was inspired by some snapshots of last nights fire pit.

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