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Rise

I will rise trying to kiss the stars Parting behind broken scars And with every rise I try to strive I perceive my goals like a shooting light For I don't know what the smell of success is As the journey of life is a never ending test Just as failure subsists a shadow of destiny Leaving no room for empathy But the rise to reach the stars will never stop As one day I will reach the top For as hard and deep the wounds may be I will rise and you will see I will rise and you will see…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/21/2015 5:41:00 AM
Full of hope and determination. Almost sounds like a mantra, which success coaches promote to be part of morning ritual. Good job and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sherwin!
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Sherwin Fernandes
Date: 5/21/2015 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Kim for the beautiful comment

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