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Riddled

I knelt by the river and looked for a smooth stone with a hole, but the rock I found was rough and riddled with a network of passages sifting light and water, sandstone worn to fragile bridges that are barely holding.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/6/2020 8:19:00 PM
Welcome back, Agnes. Lovely to read your poetry again.
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Date: 1/18/2020 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
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Date: 1/18/2020 3:36:00 AM
Really nice verse Agnes, great metaphors ...and welcome back my friend...hope all is well for 2020...^WW^ :o)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/18/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you, ^WW^, and happy new year!
Date: 1/16/2020 12:25:00 PM
Wow, this was really cool Agnes. Very deep in its meaning. Nice to see you again.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 1/17/2020 6:58:00 AM
Thanks, Chris. Glad to be back, too.