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Reverse Graffiti

light pirouettes through prismatic tapestries illuminating veils swaying silver in cosmic symphony coaxing twilight shadows where miracles bloom and stars bow

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/11/2024 2:09:00 AM

Miracles bloom and stars bow! Love that. This is a fun form and you did it so well dear charlotte. Well delivered. Pleasure reading your work always

Paige Hind

Date: 5/7/2024 5:54:00 PM

Very beautiful, almost magical

Terry Miller

Date: 5/7/2024 3:17:00 AM

I love what you have done with this competition, the result is wonderful, congratulations

Tom Woody

Date: 5/5/2024 4:28:00 PM

This is so different for you. Concrete form, not a hint of darkness or melancholy. Awesome word pairings, which is your niche

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/5/2024 12:55:00 PM

This is a pretty one, Charlotte Congratulatiions. On your top placement. SuZ

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2024 12:35:00 PM

Nice arrangement of words.. I hope you did well in this contest..

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/5/2024 9:15:00 AM

Oh you were able to pluck the sweet strings in this poem to make a melody! Congrats!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2024 5:46:00 AM

Wow! Love your choice of words and the layout that just draws the eyes to the next beautiful poetic thought. Prismatic tapesteries...good one.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/1/2024 4:15:00 PM

A real piece of art dear Charlotte

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/1/2024 9:58:00 AM

Greetings Charlotte! Reading this poem is like watching morning light spread across a darkened room. It flows so wonderfully through your amazing imagery. I especially love the last line! It really is just lovely. Every time I read one of your poems I know I am going to be in for moments of poetic delight and be inspired. Thank you. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings.

Paul Bell

Date: 4/30/2024 7:55:00 AM

Did you do your homework wrong? I'll give that one a miss, tagging in reverse is a chargeable offence the paint Police once told me.

Arlo Parker

Date: 4/29/2024 9:04:00 PM

Evocative to be sure, CP. Like it! :o)

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/29/2024 1:29:00 PM

Well you've just aced this one :)

Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 4/29/2024 1:32:00 PM

hope so, i did the first one wrong apparently so had to do another