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Retirement a Mirage

Retirement a mirage.... Retirement is a grand mirage A distant vision, vaporizing into nothingness A lie told a hundred times to sound like truth, but retirement is a grand mirage. Man was not born to retire To lie Ideally, while life passes by But to tear open the veil of retirement And look into the future, with a new born curiosity. How can you burn the love poems of your youth How will you hide the scars of your suffering How will you hide your wrinkles behind a hollow retirement How will you bury a life time of struggles in an antique box. If your lips want to smile, go ahead If your eyes want to shed a few tears, go ahead If your heart wants to dance, go ahead If your soul seeks new adventure, go ahead If You cannot run, walk, if You cannot walk, crawl, but go ahead If life does not give you smiles, share the tears, but feel all the emotions You, do not sit ideal, and let life pass by You, savor every smile, every tear drop. You, keep your heart warm and cozy, for God to rest You, carry the lamp of love, for friend or foe to find the way You, drink with friends, dance with your family. You, walk with your head held high, embrace every stranger. You, light the world with your heart You, give wings to your scars You, give voice to your wrinkles You, leave the world a better place, than born into. You were never born to retire, but be reborn. - Dr Fazal Faroqui

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Date: 3/11/2023 5:24:00 PM
I loved this poem. Especially when you said "Man was not born to retire". Retirement is indeed a new beginning.
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Date: 3/11/2023 4:13:00 PM
A wonderful and smooth-flowing poem. I retired from the corporate world in 2012 but I didn't retire from life. Your poem is encouraging and I love your last line.
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Date: 3/11/2023 11:08:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem very much. If after a few lines I’m not captured I go to a different poem but if the second doesn’t move. I hit delete. But I loved this and will read more because it reminds me. Don’t ask what but it does !
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Date: 3/11/2023 2:34:00 AM
You are so right, Fazal. I have enjoyed reading this, and feel very much the same.
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Date: 3/11/2023 1:56:00 AM
An outstanding poem that uplifts and inspires us all to continue in the many challenges of life's beauty. My Warmest welcome to you on Poetry Soup. I love your first posted poem a lot. Hope to read more from you soon. Blessings to you always. Hugs
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Date: 3/11/2023 1:40:00 AM
A thoughtful poem with a flowing style. It is true that one does not retire until the end of one`s journey in life.
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Date: 3/10/2023 7:36:00 PM
Welcome aboard and the axioms within these lines startle the pigeons out of the belltowers....such a life echoes my own...what a wonderful time to soak in exploring knowledge of poetry, science,and philosophy....you name it...the winds fill the sails and a world to explore....Fazal you have said it all....loved it
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Date: 3/10/2023 5:11:00 PM
Nicely stated.
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Date: 3/10/2023 4:49:00 PM
Just one poem but, a "Lifetime Membership" . . . ? Interesting. A disjuncture between culture and the human psyche . . . maybe? It's pro/motive (Is 'The Death of the Poet' dead?) but remains 'true to itself'. It has integrity but . . . Welcome to poetry soup new member (I think). Have fun!
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Date: 3/10/2023 1:23:00 PM
Great energetic poem on change. Let us be reborn toward perfection on a continuum and let us use the word change instead of age!
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Date: 3/10/2023 1:19:00 PM
One of the most powerful plems I ever read Welcome to pS We all got up today and all of us have only 24 hours, period. If you’re 18 28,48 or 88 what’s the difference? None Life as happiiness. sorrow, and if people want to be lemon face at any age, that’s their choice May they enjoy it.. L O,L Being grateful for 24 hours makes any day wonderful. Being ungrateful, makes every day a hell on earth. Panagiota
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Date: 3/10/2023 12:56:00 PM
Your work hits the mark! I really enjoyed this poem you bring truth and beauty together with the threads of living. Beautiful! Paulette
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Date: 3/10/2023 12:40:00 PM
Fabulous! Love this poem!
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Date: 3/10/2023 12:39:00 PM
Great! Well stated.
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Date: 12/11/2022 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing reality-perspective in your poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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Date: 12/9/2022 12:06:00 PM
I can't agree.I think everything is pointless so give up and retire
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