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Perhaps on hind sight they may decide to add more time they may fix the presets to make them open they may even be more user friendly but they missed it for the first time around how can you pretend to knoeledge when you hoard it when you keep it from the whole crowd and dish it out with the silver spoon as pablum carping in a stream. Refusing to be sane and safe you LORD it over otheres no Lord no power in your hand but the gang like backing of the others of your kind insisting on rules that neither help or edify the group you seem intent on making a world of non believers full of sin and queerness restricted in the use of all equipment not needing more than querulous food fed inthevieniously overhead of all the smarter ones never will agree this is exactly what it look likes this attempt at poetry is a poor ensample of a poor example of a poor man attempting poetry. In other word the man attempting to convey to the reader a poor understanding.

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Date: 3/7/2009 3:55:00 PM
Hello, was reading tonight, just wondering in this write, is "knoeledge" supposed to mean knowledge, or is it another word? some of the writers here I have to use a thesaurrus to look up words and such, just trying to learn here.. and by the way, hate conflict, though I am good at creating it. Being honest from personal experience on the soup, these arguments only prove unGodly. For who really has the sword? it would be Jesus? have a wonderful blessed day, Lucinda
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