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Respite

jagged icicles drops of frigid winter quench sparrow’s thirst 12/29/2021

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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/25/2022 3:51:00 PM
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Wow, that's a great Haiku, Laura! Portrays a stunning scene! Love ~ Mala
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/25/2022 8:55:00 PM
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Thanks so much for commenting, Malabika. So happy you enjoyed my haiku! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/17/2022 8:12:00 PM
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Great job! Surprised by the last line! Great ku!
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Bill Baker
Date: 1/15/2022 3:29:00 PM
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Lovely Haiku, Laura, and thanks for thinking of my little feathered friends. :-) I worry sometimes about the little birds we feed, when it goes below freezing. Smiles and blessing, Bill
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John Watt
Date: 1/12/2022 10:53:00 PM
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I love the contrast of jagged/frigid with the little sparrow just patiently hoping for a few drops of water to drink. Lovely imagery.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/1/2022 1:23:00 PM
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wow, I love this one If it was for that recent contest, I sure wish there had been more winners to see and that ones like yours would have also been on the list!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/1/2022 2:09:00 PM
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Thank you, Andrea! :)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/30/2021 10:44:00 AM
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What can I say but, "Well caught!" Aloha!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/30/2021 2:50:00 PM
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Thank you, Rico! :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 12/29/2021 9:13:00 PM
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Your words hold such crystal clarity I can feel the cold drops melting, also like the hopeful feel with the sparrows!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/30/2021 9:23:00 AM
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Thank you, Michelle! So happy you liked this one! :)
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 12/29/2021 8:02:00 PM
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The vital interconnectivity of all things. This poem, evokes beauty in simplicity!...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 12/30/2021 9:16:00 AM
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Thank you, Anselmo! :)

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