Reset

R est my mind. Quiet my soul. E mbattled. Tortured. Bitter. S end me home where silence reigns, E arthworms spin secrets and scars decompose. T ime relieves, energy recycles ...reset

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/2/2022 5:10:00 PM

Dear F J, your poem is very emotionally expressive and beautiful. Your last two lines, especially, are rich with imagery and alliteration. A deep and meaningful piece. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/5/2022 8:26:00 AM

Good morning Susan. Thank very much, it is truly appreciated.

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/10/2022 2:46:00 PM

Nice one, FJ ~

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/5/2022 8:25:00 AM

Thanks Line :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/11/2022 7:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/wonderful Acrostic write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Fj Thomas
Date: 7/11/2022 9:36:00 AM

Thank you Paula. The same to you :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/10/2022 10:59:00 PM

Resetting - is a great concept. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Fj Thomas
Date: 7/11/2022 9:36:00 AM

Good morning Christuraj, and thank you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/4/2021 9:26:00 PM

Well done ~ glad to find your poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, FJ.

Fj Thomas
Date: 7/11/2022 9:35:00 AM

Sorry Line, I only just turned on my notifications for comments. A belated thank you very much.

Peter Dome

Date: 12/8/2020 9:58:00 AM

So wonderfully clever like all your writes. excellent well done. Pete.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/8/2020 11:45:00 AM

You're such a sweetheart! Thanks Pete.

Robert Kinard

Date: 12/5/2020 7:32:00 AM

I also need Reset, Nice...

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/8/2020 11:45:00 AM

Definitely with you on that one Robert. Thanks :)

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/4/2020 1:38:00 PM

Deep and powerful write Flo. I need to reset also. Love this. Hugs

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/4/2020 5:01:00 PM

You definitely need a break Cecilia! Don't forget that. And thank you very much :)

James Inman

Date: 4/6/2020 10:09:00 PM

Very well written. It's a constant battle in my head. One minute busying my mind so I don't get lost in my thoughts, the next releasing the stress and trying to find the quiet inside of me.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/4/2020 4:59:00 PM

You and I have much in common it seems. Thank you Jim

Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 11:02:00 AM

This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/4/2020 4:59:00 PM

Thank you

Robert Kinard

Date: 1/8/2020 9:26:00 AM

Re-New Re-Start pick some place new. and begin again. I'll say that I have done it. As a soldier in the army moving after another assignment. I like to think that I'm home. and I like this poem.

Fj Thomas
Date: 12/4/2020 4:43:00 PM

Thank you very much Robert. Very sorry for my late reply. Life threw some rotten tomatoes at me and I had to clean up the mess.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/6/2020 10:10:00 PM

Sad, but creative. Thanks to your suggestion, I put up my first contest. Check it out!

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/6/2020 10:22:00 PM

I saw it :D I love the meanings behind my grandson's Hawaiian names but it would take me all of 2020 to make an acrostic with them lol! Unique contest concept Juliet! Which makes it that much better!!!

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 1/2/2020 12:02:00 PM

I don't think this is creepy at all. I think it's an awakening of sorts. Loving, ..."Send me home where silence reigns...", that is the Home you must travel to within the dark night to find all the secrets of answers that unfold in the Light, like those seen in a hall of psychomanteum where the ghosts of past and future respond to your now. I love this poem. Not creepy at all. It is an Epiphany. x

Fj Thomas
Date: 1/2/2020 12:41:00 PM

lolol He is my best critic when it comes to those who do not read poetry often. He is also quite honest about it as you can see. Thank you LL!