Rendezvous

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01.23.2024

Photo taken at Dadaepo Beach, Busan, South Korea by yours truly

Her prince waited by the sea to etch her portrait in powdery sands beside him before nocturnal waves danced in sheer moonlight kisses; Alas, too late in rendezvous, she captured his evanescent silhouette no more.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/29/2024 12:46:00 PM

ahhh, very smooth fibonacci

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/28/2024 4:02:00 AM

Good day, Kabayan. Magandang araw! Thanks for my placement in your recently-judged contest... honouring our country. God bless you.

Valsa George

Date: 2/25/2024 8:01:00 PM

I missed this beautiful gem. So sad....! Partings come unexpected and unknown. As the waves wash away the dream castles, she too got washed away

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2024 1:18:00 PM

this is so beautiful, and it has a sweet melancholy tone to it.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/27/2024 5:01:00 AM

Beautiful imagery and storyline, evocative and soulful: i love how descriptive this is. Island ish vibe it emanates in the most eloquent manner. Especially love the lines “ in powdery sands beside him before nocturnal waves danced in sheer moonlight kisses“ so beautiful and so deeply moving, and touching! Congratulations on your well deserved win: thank you for sharing

Jcb Brul
Date: 1/29/2024 12:22:00 PM