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Release

The DJ spins as the beats bring much needed release to a Friday crowded around the fodder of another forgotten time I knew her by a very different name before all the fame and fake fortitude getting in the way Love you say dripping off your tongue not really knowing still too young to disappear or disappoint in the right direction or dimension but not to mention your beats are felt in me too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/15/2018 5:34:00 PM
Fame will do it every time. Haven't danced in years, Something would probably break now but I love a good beat:) Cool poem, Tim. I used to have a lot of fun at dances.
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Date: 6/15/2018 2:50:00 PM
- oh sigh .... how long ago ... exactly now I felt 90 years old ... :) - Lovely, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:48:00 PM
To go out on a Friday night like when I was young was fun.. Nicely done, Tim.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/15/2018 12:37:00 PM
Sweet ink! A luscious read :) xomo!
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Date: 6/15/2018 11:15:00 AM
Nice Tim. I like how you ended it too :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 11:04:00 AM
sweet beat, nice work :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/15/2018 11:08:00 AM
Thank you kindly

Book: Shattered Sighs