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[Gogyohka Poetry Form] When relationships Drop below freezing point Frost causes a cold-war A solution to be found In the warmth of mediation -------------------------------------- Bite Size Poem #35 Poetry Contest Hosted by Line Gauthier Placed 1st ~~~~~~~

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 2:44:00 PM

Much truth found here, Paul ~

Paul Callus
Date: 11/13/2022 1:53:00 PM

Thank you, Line. Hopr you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Valsa George

Date: 8/2/2022 7:50:00 PM

When relationships go haywire, look into oneself, its causes and solutions can be easily found ! A very profound thought, Paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/5/2022 9:47:00 AM

Thank you for the insightful comments, Valsa. Have a lovely weekend! // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 3/8/2022 7:19:00 AM

love this one, Paul - so pleased to see it got a 1st place win in a contest

Paul Callus
Date: 5/5/2022 9:30:00 AM

Thank you, Jack. Best regards // paul

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/21/2022 3:01:00 PM

Hello Paul ... very nice indeed and a fitting solution - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 5/5/2022 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, my friend. Hope you are keeping well. Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/18/2022 6:18:00 AM

Enjoyed very much! Congratulations!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/20/2022 1:05:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Best regards // paul

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/17/2022 1:24:00 PM

Hi! Paul , I enjoyed your poem. I loved how you use temperture related words. Cleaver. Good luck in the contest. Blessing ~ Debra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 1:27:00 PM

Thank you for coming back with more insightful comments, Debra. Regards & goodnight // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/16/2022 3:39:00 PM

Wow! Paul, I wrote a poem on the same subject and like yours much better-Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 1:34:00 PM

I'm sure your poem is equally good, Alexis :) Thank you for stopping by, my friend. // paul

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/16/2022 7:54:00 AM

Wah!! So much said in so little piece!

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Swetha. Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/16/2022 2:59:00 AM

This was definitely a winner, first rate image Paul...Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 1:17:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Delice. Goodnight :) // paul

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/15/2022 10:44:00 AM

Paul, Your poem was outstanding. It was a well deserve win. Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus
Date: 2/17/2022 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Debra. Blessings and goodnight // paul

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2022 10:39:00 PM

Congratulations for your win and this awesome write my dear friend, Paul. I strongly agree on the message. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful day.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 7:00:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely complimentary comments, Len. Best regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 2/13/2022 3:12:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your First Place win, wonderful poem, a interesting form ~ Constance

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 6:56:00 AM

Thank you, Constance. This form is a simplified version of a Tanka; quite popular outside Soup confines. ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/13/2022 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" and so true. Love It. Have a blessed day/week to come...................

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 6:54:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. May you too enjoy a lovely and productive week. Blessings // paul

Bill Baker

Date: 2/12/2022 10:50:00 PM

A compromise is always possible in the presence of Love. Enjoyed your poem, Paul. Bill

Paul Callus
Date: 2/15/2022 6:48:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. Pleased to make your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/12/2022 8:42:00 PM

Gogyokha … interesting form, wonder why it’s not listed on PS? Congrats on your win, Paul, indeed the vibrancy of silence whispers love inked secrets to our heart, which narrow mind cannot cognise

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2022 6:14:00 AM

Thank you for your insightful feedback. ~ Although Gogyohka is not listed on Soup, it is a very popular form, and there are international sites dedicated solely to it. ~ Regards // paul

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/10/2022 1:45:00 PM

A captivating bite size poem…Delice

Paul Callus
Date: 2/14/2022 5:00:00 AM

Thank you Delice. Enjoy the week ahead! // paul

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/7/2022 1:20:00 AM

Love the metaphors in your verse Paul, hope you are keeping well. Tom

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 4:30:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Tom. So far keeping in good shape :) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/6/2022 12:36:00 PM

Hello Paul, yes meditation is the solution for the warmth. Regards Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2022 10:51:00 AM

Hello Paul, thank you. regards Darlene.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 4:28:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, Darlene. Have a lovely day. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/6/2022 11:49:00 AM

Diplomacy may go a long way. I enjoyed the metaphors in your poem Paul. I am praying for the best outcome. This is a splendid poem my friend. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 4:27:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely feedback, Connie. Always a pleasure to have you visiting:) Regards & Blessings // paul

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2022 5:24:00 AM

Yes, it becomes a cold war. Introspection can always help to seek within.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/8/2022 4:23:00 AM

Thank you for the visit and comments, Vijay. Regards // paul