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A good example for my "VIEWS FOR POEMS" Poetry Contest

Goodluck.

Unhealthy human body, fighting its owner, in need of a Goldsmith months of hygiene malpractice, now counting as the sixth, his blanket of microflora possesses a morgue beneath weeks without touching water, despite the pretense quite stealth one, five, seven, nine; already getting umpteenth. From 03:18am to 20:16 hours; the evidence of my anger’s width awful smell, recites loud acrostics from low esteem teeth and the rate of hang-over vomitus, beats any myth, last month was 89; already 83, ten days later, is this filth my mathematics can’t be wrong, rent expires on the fifteenth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 6/28/2020 2:16:00 PM
thanks for the model for your contest, Funom. I don't suppose we need to use the form that the originally viewed poem was part of (since I see you did yours as rhyme and not acrostic like the original you used it from). I hope you get some great entries!
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Date: 6/22/2020 2:18:00 AM
I understand the microflora, Funom, but my maths is awful, interesting poetry though,
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/22/2020 7:37:00 AM
Oh! When you meet a condition like this, face to face, you will not know when your mind will reset to love mathematics.
Date: 6/19/2020 7:12:00 PM
Where have you been? Weeks without touching the water.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/22/2020 7:37:00 AM
I have been around, being a medical practitioner, I have been busy during this pandemic. Thank you so much for your comment.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/22/2020 7:19:00 AM
I have been around, being a medical practitioner, I have been busy during this pandemic. Thank you so much for your comment.
Date: 6/16/2020 8:08:00 PM
"Hygiene malpractice turns into a math problem!" Well written..
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/22/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Joseph May

Book: Shattered Sighs