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Self Portrait Contest  Sponsor: Jaymee Thomas

January 12, 2024

With cloak removed... I'm as liable to get lost in a daydream as I am to scream with delight when a chrysalis releases a Monarch. I find nights enchanting when stars are agleam, and feel like dancing in the light of moonbeams. I wake at the edge of dawn to hear songbirds sing. It's then, as the world lies hushed and still, I drop the tethered reins of my imagination, allowing it to run free and wild at will. My hazel eyes deepen to a somber shade of green when I see the look of desire in my loved one's eyes. There's no way I could disguise what's in my heart, or sadness brooding in them when we're apart. I love Autumn's chill, holding hands on walks and talking about many things... Angel wings, honeybee stings, the way silk clings in soft candlelight, and loving arms that hold me tight. Faith gets me through heartaches and sorrows. I try not to look at mistakes from my past. It does no good to look behind, so I'd rather look ahead, dreaming of what I may find in my tomorrows. Give me canvas and paint, a pen and pad to write. The arts are my passions. I'm comfortable hanging out in denim, but mixing leather and lace is the fashion if the mood is right. I'll hide in shadowed darkness if love is taken away and spread my arms to a puppy who wants to play. Sometimes I wear a smile on my lips to distract people from seeing my grief when I can't hide it in my eyes anymore. Some things should remain a mystery, so I'll stop here before exposing more of myself through this partially open door.

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Date: 1/13/2024 8:08:00 PM
Verse 3 was my favorite…very expressive! Congratulations, Lin, on your win!
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Date: 1/13/2024 7:57:00 PM
You have made the page into a mirror...catching the reflection of a beautiful soul. Just stand back and enjoy...
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Date: 1/13/2024 10:27:00 AM
This is full of everything I know about you, Lin. Good luck in the contest, my friend.
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Date: 1/12/2024 3:35:00 PM
an evocative self-portrait, Lin. It's great that you don't focus on mistakes. I especially liked: Give me a pen and pad to write. The arts are my passions. I'm comfortable hanging out in denim..." I'm the same way, except writing and being with my hubby are my passions. I'm comfortable hanging out with him in denim. :-) Have an enjoyabe weekend, hugs, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2024 7:42:00 AM
Recalling negative moments in our lives has no merit. We can only hope to avoid them and learn from our mistakes. Thanks and hugs to you, Sara. My weekend will be spent writing when the flu allows. Diagnosed this morning.
Date: 1/12/2024 12:45:00 PM
You paint a stunning self portrait with your words Lin, beautiful poetry. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2024 7:41:00 AM
I'll take 'stunning' any day. Thank you for your ongoing support of my poetry, Tom.
Date: 1/12/2024 10:24:00 AM
A real nice poem.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2024 7:40:00 AM
Thank you, Jay.

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