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REFLECTIONS faces on the pond one face above the other a willow leaf falls the three ripple together hear the lover’s sweet laughter peering deeply through the looking glass old becomes young on the pond a yellow scum and in-and-out in-and-out this green-yellow-blue-green jumping frog Dave Austin

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Date: 10/19/2015 6:15:00 PM
thanks for visiting my poem today, Daver. Maybe you have seen all of mine same as I've seen yours by now!
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Date: 10/19/2015 3:58:00 PM
Lovely images. Makes one think too, beyond what the picture offers. A delightful read today, Daver. 7. Thanks.
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Date: 10/19/2015 7:58:00 AM
What a lovely and a great write here. It is very interesting. Excellent......A.M.
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Date: 10/18/2015 7:55:00 PM
Love this one, Daver. You have got the knack!!
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:01:00 PM
Great Imagery, Daver!
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:28:00 AM
That is so good - an immediate seven and a FAVE! The frog is delightful!
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Date: 10/18/2015 8:23:00 AM
Fantastic images! Enjoyed these this morning.
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Date: 10/17/2015 3:16:00 PM
a most beautiful string of tanka Daver lovely imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2015 10:20:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Daver. That first tanka is most beautiful. // paul
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