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Reflecting Ripples

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I stand alone a barking tree, where silent sorrows of ripples flee, No one hears my calamity, wearing weeps of my raped reality… Branches droop to ice-cold ground, solitudes surface of their drowned, Abysmal anguish of leaves have browned, lacrimal echoes of their sound. Randomized reflections of rivers flow, suffering scourges in their woe, Ripples raging in their row, creating cabalistic contrasts as they grow… The forest dense as to populate, the seeds of seduction must copulate, All is dormant until the eyes dilate, weeping willows that magistrate. I accept my life near the lamenting lake, weathering wounds as I wake, The wood whispers as to ache, secluded shadows share the snake… Wandering waters that ripples bring, vines that struggle in their swing, Alone in my salvaged spring, where sparrows segregate in their sing. Gif # 1 02.25.2020 Placed 1'st & POTD...Thank You

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2020 1:14:00 AM

Back with big congratulations on your awesome win with this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet

Date: 3/14/2020 4:03:00 PM

Exquisitely well-done, W^W, beautifully rhymed and word usage was well-placed and artfully crafted and worthy to be placed as a first, my thanks for your participation, Aloha, William

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/15/2020 6:39:00 AM

Thank you, William...your contests are by far one of my favorites to enter...( cheque is in the soup mail lol )...all the best my friend...the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Valerie Staton

Date: 3/6/2020 7:56:00 AM

A wonderful read. I'm Faving this wonderful write!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/6/2020 8:10:00 AM

Thank you so much, Valerie...and double thanks for the fav, my friend :o)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/2/2020 12:08:00 PM

What a wonderful choice for POTD! Congratulations my friend! xxoo

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/2/2020 12:47:00 PM

Thank you so much dear Connie...

Charles Messina

Date: 2/29/2020 7:18:00 AM

Alone in your salvaged spring, I hope the sparrows sing... to you Wing-'ster. And may they sing you songs of forever happiness. Congrats on POTD. Love & Peace ^CM^ :o)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/29/2020 7:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Charles...you are indeed a poetic brother :o)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/29/2020 4:39:00 AM

Dear Wingster, Was not on line so missed this glorious creation. Belated Congratulations! A POTD is truly an honour~ this write.....most deservedly so, my friend. Love****from my heart to yours! Pangiota Romios

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/29/2020 7:25:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Panni...love you too :o)

John Watt

Date: 2/28/2020 12:26:00 PM

Wings, yet more amazing words flowing from your pen. Hearty congratulations on having this powerful poem selected for POTD. Keep writing, brother! ~ John

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 10:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, Johnny Watts lol...

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/27/2020 7:59:00 PM

WoW!WW, This is so beautiful and well written. Your content, imagery and rhymes were on point. This a poetic masterpiece! Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of day and best wishes in the contest. Ps, Take lil sis under your wings bro, so I can write even a small fraction of how you write:-) Alexis

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear sis Alex...

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/27/2020 5:45:00 PM

Such a lovely poem filled with amazing images and masterful alliteration. It just flows in continuous ripples like the gif. Congratulations, Wingster, on your POTD!

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:31:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam...

Robert Lindley

Date: 2/27/2020 4:56:00 PM

Congratulations on this excellent poem being awarded POTD my friend. Every verse a true delight to read. A definite fav too.... God bless..

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Robert...

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/27/2020 4:32:00 PM

I believe we have a winner. Oh, I see it was honored as POTD - I couldn't agree more with that decision. An absolutely joy to read for it is fine poetry indeed. From start to finish, I loved it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Cay Cay...

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 2/27/2020 4:16:00 PM

So happy to see a highly creative and gifted poet appreciated and honoured by dear fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations, Winged Warrior, on POTD honour! A well earned recognition! My deepest regards and blessings.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Besma...

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 2/27/2020 2:48:00 PM

Such evidence of talent. Congratulations!

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:29:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sunlite...

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/27/2020 1:01:00 PM

Congratulations Wingman on POTD. Great images within these lines. Good luck old man:)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, much older man lol

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/27/2020 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD Wingster :)

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Heidi...

Mark Koplin

Date: 2/27/2020 10:31:00 AM

Well written. Congratulations on potd. Surely to be at the top of winners.

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mark...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/27/2020 10:30:00 AM

You have set the mood, and I can feel these moments- as this tree whispers softy ..to me. Beautiful POV poem here. Awake and alive, it soon will be. In Spring. Congratulations my Wonderful Warrior with Wings. :) On Poem of the Day. Ripples of emotions, indeed. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior
Date: 2/28/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Brandy...