Reeling

Reeling from the news, Life did not turn out as planned. It turned out better. A celebratory haiku by Brenda Molmod Atry 4/23/2011

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Nicole King

Date: 10/16/2012 7:21:00 PM

Wow. Wonderful haiku, and very celebratory indeed. Congrats on the feature.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/15/2012 9:55:00 AM

A haiku with an unusual twist...congratulatins on being featured.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2011 8:40:00 PM

wow, I would love to have this kind of news to be reeling from!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/25/2011 5:29:00 PM

Ok Brenda here goes;) this is not a haiku. It is a very nice short VERSE. haiku must be about nature, must be in the present tense, must be 2 parts [this is realing 1 subject] should not be caoitalized OR punctuated. BIG hugs I hope this helps, Light & Love [PS Brenda wanted a critique]

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 8:41:00 PM

lol.. i love it... so positive... cheers to you.. .. I had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.