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Redeemer - a Pleiades

Redeemer of mankind Relinquished His life on Revered Calvary's tree, Remitting this world's sins, Resurrected again; Risen Saviour, He now Reigns supreme in heaven. 04.15.2021 For Kim Merryman's "Pleiades - R" contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2021 5:06:00 PM

excellent ink Jo, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/19/2021 3:05:00 PM

Dear Jo, your gifted pen spills with reverent beauty in your prayerful poem. Splendid! Congratulations for your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 2:50:00 PM

This wowed me, Jo! Beautiful description of your title and the flow of your words and lines was excellent! Congrats on your 1st place win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2021 9:53:00 AM

Glad to see this topping the list Jo, Congrats on your win

Joseph May

Date: 4/17/2021 3:42:00 PM

Redeemed by his blood, Very nicely done Jo, best wishes

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 4/17/2021 9:34:00 AM

Lovely piece Jo, bringing home the story of redemption. Blessings always,Gordon

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/17/2021 9:14:00 AM

Your faith shines through in your pleiades Jo, well written, Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/17/2021 8:07:00 AM

Your "R"'s shine in this poem of divinity and worship. Excellent work, Jo.

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/17/2021 7:01:00 AM

This is excellent. Well done Jo :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/16/2021 8:50:00 AM

Inspirational writing that illuminates the soul, dearest little sister, Jo! Wonderfully done! Hugs xxx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/15/2021 5:29:00 PM

I hope this wins. The message and your layout are wonderful!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/15/2021 10:24:00 AM

You used this form to the best of its ability in this marvelous poem Jo. Bravo! I am sure it will rate very high in the contest. Blessings xxoo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/15/2021 8:15:00 AM

I love love love this!!! Wonderful - I hope it wins top placement. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/15/2021 8:10:00 AM

You've chosen perfect 'R' words to describe his sacrifice. This Pleiades is wonderful, Jo.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/15/2021 8:02:00 AM

A great R Pleiades on such a spiritual level. Best for a win.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/15/2021 7:54:00 AM

WoW! Jo, You used the letter R to compose a well-written spiritual write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis