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Redamancy--Poetry Contest

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a chance encounter a sensation of love comes one touch, our souls intertwine? heartstrings taut, yearning two hearts beat as one, love flows surrender, redamancy

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/11/2024 4:09:00 PM

Lovely....oh, the intensity of the moment...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2024 7:26:00 AM

love yours. I bet this makes the list.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:23:00 PM

thank you for your encouragement, Andrea. I hope it makes 'the list.' have a splendid evening, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/2/2024 6:56:00 AM

Delightfully charming--nothing more beautiful than exchange of two souls in love. A tender write, Sara--a surrender to each other.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:24:00 PM

thanks for your kind words...grateful you found my poem charming and a tender write. Appreciate you and your visits. Enjoy your weekend, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/2/2024 5:43:00 AM

An excellent take on this contest, dear Sara... nice arrangement of words and use of form.. All the best in the contest..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 5:24:00 PM

thank you, Silent One. I appreciate your encouragement.

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/1/2024 10:25:00 PM

A love returned indeed. Love is written all over you and Bill, Sara. A new word learned for me! B0l

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:35:00 AM

ahhh, thanks Anaya, for your kind words and for your well wishes. Have a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/1/2024 7:08:00 PM

Sara, your poignant verse resonates with the profound understanding of how souls can intricately entwine, engendering a potent elixir of love. Alas, the lamentable truth remains that the tides of time have ushered in a paradigm shift, altering the very fabric of our existence.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:38:00 AM

thanks, dear Sotto, for your kind, lovely, and accurate words. I agree with you on the 'lamentable truth.' The paradigm shift to which you're referring has indeed altered the fabric of our existence...the long term effects of which we see in the chaotic, dysfunctional state in which we live. Have a pleasant day! your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 3/1/2024 5:01:00 PM

Loving entry for the contest, Sara. It sounds a lot like us, my truelove. Good luck in the contest! Big hugs, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/2/2024 4:36:00 AM

thanks for your visit, my hero! Yes, it does sound a lot like us...in fact we were the inspiration and catalyst for this poem. Glad you saw that. hugs, Sara