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Rearview Mirror

Rearview Mirror You take me for granted You always have You run over me Stomp on me Treat me like dirt Under your feet Have I offended you Was I not Always there for you You grated me Put holes in my existence Years of being Your conduit through life You don't care to look At what you left behind A pile of rubble A poem you have not entered in a contest#8 Sponsor-Poet Destroyer A Greg Hoffman 6/16/14

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Arlene Smith

Date: 6/27/2014 6:47:00 AM

Greg, people who treat others badly aren't worth the trouble... Very heartfelt write.. Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2014 5:12:00 PM

Very expressive write, Greg. I don't see much success in such a relationship. Perhaps counseling....or moving on! Congrats on your win. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/26/2014 8:01:00 AM

Hi Greg, this is such a powerful write about selfish, heartless people who take us for granted. Well we don't deserve any kind of abuse so we shouldn't put up with it and give them the boot! Congratulations on a fine, well-deserved win, my friend!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2014 1:38:00 AM

Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/25/2014 11:42:00 PM

Greg, , Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" OR My Newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact, since March 2010. LOVE ~LINDA