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female attraction incessant male mating choir cicada debut
May 29, 2018 Magicicada Contest by Maureen McGreavy N/A

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Date: 6/19/2018 10:34:00 AM
A return visit... cool haiku Miss Susan, well written, my love!!! Hugs, Happy Jack XOX
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/20/2018 11:44:00 AM
Awww thank you!
Date: 6/19/2018 6:30:00 AM
An awesome haiku Susan...hear ye, hear ye...you are a winner in the Warrior's court......love & light...^WW^
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/20/2018 11:44:00 AM
Awww! That's the one that counts! :)
Date: 6/16/2018 1:13:00 PM
You have a lovely haiku, Susan! The line "incessant male mating choir" is especially creative. Hugs, Carolyn
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/18/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thanks, Carolyn.
Date: 6/15/2018 5:43:00 PM
I want you to know that even though your poem didn't get a placement in the contest, it's a fine poem. I like it even better now than when first I read it. (btw, mine didn't place either, and I still think it's a good one). Sometimes, it's just that the contest and the poem are not quite in sync somehow. Anyway, you and I move on, one step closer to our next winners! All the best always, gw
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/15/2018 8:08:00 PM
:) Thanks. You're so sweet. After reading a few winners, I wondered if I even entered the right contest, totally missed the whole point of this contest lol, but darn it is a good haiku :) Thanks for being so thoughtful.
Date: 6/15/2018 2:38:00 PM
Susan, I really like your haiku. Well done. Hope you are doing well . Constance
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/15/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 6/14/2018 1:51:00 PM
Great Haiku Susan, good luck in contest a winner for me so well written. :))
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/14/2018 2:15:00 PM
So sweet! Thank you :)
Date: 6/14/2018 7:37:00 AM
there goes the ' love call...' what an enchanting 'ku, susan... huggs
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/14/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much! :)
Date: 6/9/2018 4:19:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/12/2018 6:09:00 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 6/8/2018 5:55:00 AM
short clever and incisive, great one. Faux.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/12/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/8/2018 5:50:00 AM
Clever poetry, Susan, love it!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/12/2018 6:08:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/5/2018 4:35:00 PM
Anything involving cicadas appeals to me, Susan, and so does this! As yet no cicadas in my garden, but once they come I have that choir going at it on a daily basis:) Regards // paul
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/6/2018 12:50:00 AM
Thanks, Paul!
Date: 6/5/2018 10:40:00 AM
Perfect coordination of image with poem. Should do well in the contest! :)gw
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/6/2018 12:49:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 6/2/2018 10:10:00 AM
Great form Susan, well done, best wishes...
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Date: 6/2/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 6/2/2018 9:23:00 AM
Very nicely done Susan, GL in the contest
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 7:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/2/2018 8:16:00 AM
Really good haiku, Susan! Janice
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 7:05:00 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Date: 5/31/2018 11:42:00 PM
The little creatures sure know how to court the natural way, Cute one Susan .
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:52:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/31/2018 9:26:00 AM
Beautiful entry Susan...full of mating songs lol...love and light...^WW^
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/2/2018 12:51:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/30/2018 5:31:00 PM
This is simple and perfect at the same time.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 11:46:00 PM
Thank you, Richard.
Date: 5/30/2018 6:35:00 AM
I love the sound they make...Summer love. Great Haiku, Susan. Elaine
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thanks, Elaine.
Date: 5/30/2018 4:47:00 AM
What a melody of a Haiku, dear Susan! In Greece the symphony never ends during summer! Superb!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 11:45:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/29/2018 11:28:00 PM
Nothing like a pretty cicada to make the males burst into song, lovely hakiu Susan. Good luck. Tom.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 12:47:00 AM
Thanks, Tom!
Date: 5/29/2018 10:22:00 PM
Awesome title, Susan. Inspiration came to you in full bloom. Well done.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 12:47:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 5/29/2018 8:14:00 PM
Loved this !! Simple and sweet !
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/30/2018 12:47:00 AM
Thank you, Carrie!
Date: 5/29/2018 6:35:00 PM
Awesome approach to the theme!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/29/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 5/29/2018 2:31:00 PM
Oh, Susan, the metaphoric medley herein...nicely done
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/29/2018 8:17:00 PM
Thank you!
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