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Raptures Eve

Without light, the world is cold and dark. Sans decorous evergreens to light up the park. Cries in the night, flesh hidden from view. It’s a nightmare - a deep, unsettling brew. The sun, moon and stars, lightning flash all traded away for immorality’s cash. “Think…think…think…” Can’t remember one iota of ink from the treasure trove of prophecy and its fulfilment. Despondency - weeping and gnashing of teeth in an angry and funereal bier underneath the sheath you thought protected you - world was your oyster, avoided the pew. Laughter and arrogance like thick fog, now you reside in a fiery bog. Dear one, this is not what the Father wanted, however you, in reverie, were not undaunted. “Commandments, rules, bah-humbug…” Your claws, to the center of the earth, dug. Your plot led to your eternal plot. You’d close your ears to what was taught. Is it merely a nightmare? Is there time left to believe? The hourglass sand of 2,000 plus years. Rapture’s Eve? 12/15/2022

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Date: 12/22/2022 8:02:00 AM
By disobeying the commandments of God, we are choosing our own doom. If we refuse to be led by His light, we will be in perpetual darkness. In your poem I see the zest of a child of God who wishes earnestly that everyone should turn to God . Powerful composition dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/22/2022 3:21:00 PM
Sigh…we do hope! ((hugs))
Date: 12/20/2022 12:02:00 AM
Simply outstanding work. What a wonderful piece, Miss Kim. Rapture, indeed. =;o]
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you, Arlo! I appreciate you!
Date: 12/17/2022 3:15:00 PM
We only begin to believe when we are ready when the truth speaks to hour heart, nicely penned Kim, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2022 6:05:00 PM
So true.
Date: 12/16/2022 4:17:00 PM
"Dear one, this is not what the Father wanted, however you, in reverie, were not undaunted" -- Divinely inspired. The entire work. He speaks to his children, loudly and clearly (softly and tenderly)...but our hearing is tuned to a world of arrogant echos. Blessings my friend. Merry Christmas!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/15/2022 10:57:00 AM
We all have free will. Choose wisely.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2022 2:28:00 PM
For sure and we all hope those around us do…especially our family. Hugs and Merry Christmas, sweet Victor!
Date: 12/15/2022 10:18:00 AM
Well done Kim! We are given choices about the way we use the gift of life - for ourselves or in service to our God. Your have poetically illustrated, and vibrantly illustrated this conundrum of life. Sending you blessings of peace and joy for Christmas. Your poem reminds me that God too made a choice and we are eternally blessed if we so choose.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2022 2:29:00 PM
Was it a choice or his nature? Oh how he loves us! Thanks, Sam!

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