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Rapture

We watch Apollo paint the horizon and disappear into the water while walking hand in hand on a remote, pristine beach. Civilization is a faint light in the distance-just out of reach. Strolling sky clad-our bodies are being caressed and invigorated by Neptune’s cool sea breeze. As the moon goddess illuminates the dusk and ascends to her throne in the heavens-we are captivated by the moonlight in each other’s eyes and are instantly drawn together like magnets. Lost in a gaze, we become intertwined like beach wood and drop to our knees. Time is of no concern-for we are in a realm of the gods- where years are like days. Being fueled by the spirits of fire our yearning ignites into a blaze. Overcome with passion-like ocean to beach-we experience wave after wave of pleasure. Embraced by each other-we lie on the warm white silky sand-enjoying the cosmos and thinking this is a gift from the gods that we will always treasure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/9/2014 12:55:00 AM
I would hear no end of sea and sand or of passion beneath the moon. The treasure is the moment and no more, until the next. Beautifully written!
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:06:00 PM
Deborah, you are welcome...PD
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Date: 7/27/2014 5:56:00 PM
Deborah, This happens to be an excellent poem, to have featured on the poetry soup's home page. Congratulations, enjoy having your poem featured this week. Always ~ LINDA ~
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Deborah Kelley
Date: 7/27/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/14/2014 10:11:00 AM
Deborah,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2014 12:28:00 PM
Hi Deborah, thank you for sharing this beautiful, inspirational write that I truly enjoyed reading! Well done!
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Date: 7/12/2014 2:42:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Deborah. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/10/2014 9:44:00 AM
Simply beautiful Deborah...welcome...hugs Tim
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Date: 7/10/2014 7:32:00 AM
Deborah,, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/10/2014 4:46:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Deborah :) - I choose your first good written poem - I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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