Rapture - Hiku
native drums beat in sync
dreams dance round the fire --
my head on his chest
Susan Ashley
November 21, 2021
~ Third Place ~
Premiere Contest: A Hiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
~ Seventh Place ~
Premiere Contest: Hiku (Disciplined Brevity)
Sponsor: William Kekaula
howmanysyllables.com: 16; 6 - 5 - 5
howmanysyllables.com/words/fire: 1 syllable
Copyright © Susan Ashley | Year Posted 2021
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