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Randomling 19: Dog Day Afternoon

WATER! BALL! CHASE! salt, waves, undertow I don't know what's going on here. But I'm HAPPY!

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/15/2015 8:11:00 AM

Here boy! Bring back the ball boy! Good dog, your such a good boy! Sorry I couldn't resist.

Mary Rotman
Date: 8/15/2015 11:59:00 AM

Very good. Those were the exact emotions that crossed his face when he first saw the ocean.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2015 3:27:00 PM

So cute. And great title to give it as a play on words.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/9/2015 6:23:00 PM

Love the imagery Mary I live 5 mins from the beach so i can relate to what you portray:-) hugs Jan xx

Mary Rotman
Date: 8/9/2015 7:01:00 PM

You lucky "Dog" you. Lord I wish it was less than a 12-hour drive to the ocean! Did it come across that the dog was surprised/dismayed at the events o the 2nd line?