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Rainy Days

It's Raining. Come on my beautiful lady its spring showers let us fly with the rain knowing how much you love the raining season,living next to the ocean, my promenade on the sand hand in hand with the rain always allows me to regain my strength, it gives me the power to share my deep feelings & emotions. It hit me tonight to run quickly after the rain, and that is only the beginning. Oh! let it rain again & again,let the thunder start singing a song with the strong rain drops vibrating like the echo of music from afar. Walking alone by the ocean I felt heavy drops of rain flowing down my cheeks mingling with my tears whispering,its me your friend the rain again,I haven't much time,I am passing by to listen to your heart beat & wash away your fears to run under your feet warm them with a hug,and hear me convey a message to your thoughts that i love you. & decided to carry you away out West,deliver you to pass sometime with your children,hug them, love them,talk to them,share with them,sit with them until I come back to fly you home again. Here I am back from this memorable panoramic journey while piloted by the pouring rain, love the rain,an eternal friend as long as I live. Therese Bacha 21/5/2013

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Date: 10/10/2014 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Theresa.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/10/2014 11:33:00 AM
Hi Brenda, it is so sweet of you to pass by to review my poem. Thank you so so much. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 10/10/2014 8:45:00 AM
- I enjoy reading your lovely and well written poem, Therese ! - Congratulations on your 4rd place in the contest! - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/10/2014 8:51:00 AM
Hello sweet Anne, always the faithful friend, thank you so much for passing by. I have been absent for a while, hopefully gradually I will come back. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry xoxoox
Date: 10/10/2014 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations my dear poet friend Therese. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write. Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/10/2014 8:54:00 AM
Hello Leonora, its so nice of you to pass by and leave that heartfelt review about my poem. I am so happy for this win, a beautiful surprise. Thank you. Hugs Terry xoxo
Date: 10/10/2014 6:36:00 AM
well penned poem, Theresa, congrats on the win
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/10/2014 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram, I do appreciate your kindness to pass by and review my poem. Bless you Terry xx
Date: 10/10/2014 4:55:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/10/2014 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for your sharing review. I am so happy, as I was not expected to win. So nice of you to pass by. Have a great weekend. Hugs Terry
Date: 4/29/2013 1:37:00 PM
captivating picture you write here Terry ,and you won with it as well ;} you have a blessed day ;} xxx
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/29/2013 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Debbie, hope you are fine, have a wonderful day. Love Terry xo
Date: 4/18/2013 6:03:00 AM
Sorry The contest already happened. glad that you won..... Lucy
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/18/2013 9:24:00 AM
Oh what a pity, maybe next time. Hope you will feel better. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 4/18/2013 6:01:00 AM
Terry; You have a beauty of a poem here.I love the April showers and rain anytime. we had not been getting much rain here, but today we are going to have Stormy Weather. I have to check this contest have a great day...... Lucy
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/18/2013 9:23:00 AM
Hi Lucy, thank you so much for your encouraging comments. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 4/17/2013 6:32:00 PM
I loved the mingling with my tears...congratulations.. Donna
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/17/2013 6:55:00 PM
I love your comments, they are a bundle of depth, and lovely. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/17/2013 8:38:00 AM
Good morning Terry, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/17/2013 11:17:00 AM
Good morning to you, my wonderful visiter, thank you PD, Thank you so much , will see you soon. Love Terry xoxoxo
Date: 4/17/2013 7:40:00 AM
congrats on your win Terry
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/17/2013 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph for passing by. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/16/2013 10:12:00 PM
Ahhh Love the rain and Absolutely loved your poem. You had my heart strings directing them to your trip out west. Beautiful write Terry, think I'll take a walk in the next rainfall : ) (((Hugs)))
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/16/2013 10:41:00 PM
Hi Bernard, thank you so much, take a walk, and be happy. Love Terry xoxo Nice to see you my friend.
Date: 4/14/2013 7:55:00 PM
This is a tremendous, awesome write my friend! I am enthralled by the tenderness of this delightful poem! What a glorious and well written piece, Great Work!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 8:20:00 PM
Thank you Russell, my good friend with nice very nice comments, thank you Russell, you are such a gentlemen. Love Terry xoxo
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 8:18:00 PM
Thank you Russell, my good friend with nice very nice comments, thank you Russell, you are such a gentlemen. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 4/14/2013 12:47:00 PM
Simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 4/14/2013 1:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, so nice of you to pass by. Terry xoxo

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