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"Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby." - Langston Hughes.

"A rainy day is like a lovely gift -- you can sleep late and not feel guilty." - Elizabeth Jane Howard.

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A Sam Scott poem:
28th March 2024
A poem for Maundy Thursday
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Rainy days. We have them. When the sun don't shine A blank page stares Without a rhyme They rattle On the window pain Each drop a tear Or sad refrain But as I lie In soft repose A secret joy My spirit knows As morning birds Are not perturbed Their tune unhindered Undisturbed Such is the rhythm Of the rain Allowing me Without disdain To write these words Of love again

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2024 5:35:00 AM

The rhythm and rhyme of this poem resembles falling rain, Sam. I find that one of the benefits of old age is being able not to go to work on a rainy day and watch the outer world from behind a window pane. Regards // paul

Sam Scott
Date: 4/11/2024 9:43:00 PM

I think, Paul, it is a wonderful season you are in. May the rain always fascinate and sing a unique song to inspire you. Thank you too for your comment on my poem, I hadn't noticed! Perhaps the rain's rhythm guided my cadence? How wonderful. Blessings, Sam :)

Joseph May

Date: 4/10/2024 3:41:00 AM

Rain does not stop the birds from singing, Very nicely penned

Sam Scott
Date: 4/10/2024 4:35:00 AM

A lesson we can all learn (aka Gene Kelly). Thanks for stopping by Joseph! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/7/2024 7:57:00 PM

I really like the melodic lilt of the poesy and the tilt of the lines, Sam. Thanks. ~ Peter Patter

Sam Scott
Date: 4/7/2024 11:18:00 PM

I like that! :) Thanks Gershon - always great to hear from you.

Gary Radice

Date: 4/6/2024 11:55:00 AM

I'm glad you commented on a poem of mine Scott because it brought me to your own work. I love this. I need to read more of your work. Cheers - Gary

Sam Scott
Date: 4/6/2024 2:35:00 PM

Gary, so great you called by and thank you for such an amazing endorsement :) All the best

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/4/2024 1:27:00 PM

Love the rhythm dear Sam as it’s a great poem to recite and your narration, as always, is wonderfully effective. This is such a delightful, serene read so well described that the reader can hear the rainfall and feel the poetic impact it can have to inspire putting pen to paper. Very atmospheric and especially loved the last few lines. Your own unique style of poetry has really emerged as you put your own stamp on your beautiful, meaningful poems.

Sam Scott
Date: 4/4/2024 9:35:00 PM

Wow. Christina, you are such a generous friend with your comments. I am a little overwhelmed but thankful for your kindness. Sometimes, we can be birdsong breaking through the rain. Blessings. Sx

Christina Bowring
Date: 4/4/2024 1:27:00 PM

Really impressed and inspiring too. Blessings and smiles to you x :):)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/30/2024 6:51:00 PM

I love the soft sound of the rain, because it creates a beautiful mood for me. The melody is poetic in many ways. Sam, your thoughts leave me in awe. Which is a good thing, because I feel as though I'm floating. Thank you for that. :) Brandy

Sam Scott
Date: 3/30/2024 10:13:00 PM

You are so kind Brandy. It means a great deal being complimented by such a masterfully poetic presence as yourself. I am humbled and so very grateful, thank you. Love and blessings, Brandy, this Easter. Sx

Silent One

Date: 3/28/2024 11:33:00 AM

I like how your poem is a gentle reminder to embrace life's storms with grace and gratitude, recognizing that within the tears and the gray skies lie the seeds of inspiration and love. It's a testament to the power of creativity to transform even the dreariest of days into moments of beauty and joy..

Sam Scott
Date: 3/28/2024 11:15:00 PM

Thanks S1 for delving into the deeper sentiment and pausing to comment. It would be easy to think the world does not need another rain poem.. yet the desire to express emotion and mood from it's presence is palpable. Blessings :))

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/28/2024 7:27:00 AM

Hello Sam, you have beautifully captured the paradox of melancholy and serenity accompanying the pitter-patter of raindrops. Amidst the gloom, there's a secret joy, a tranquil refuge where creativity blossoms. I loved how your verses dance with the rhythm of the rain, embracing its undisturbed melody as inspiration to create words of love once more. Yes, even in the stormiest of times, beauty and renewal are waiting to be discovered. Great Poem! - Blessings, Daniel

Sam Scott
Date: 3/28/2024 9:19:00 AM

As always grateful thanks for the comments. Sam :)

Ink Empress

Date: 3/28/2024 1:19:00 AM

Profound poem written on rain, so well delivered and described. I agree rain can give inspiration too to so many, and definitely makes me lazy on rainy days. I love “ a blank page stares without a rhyme” how clever and creative of you to describe, your muse. Such is the rhythm of rain that which youv shown through your words woven seamlessly! The evocative touch and theme of this really stood out for me as well as the quotes used.Always a pleasure reading your work.

Sam Scott
Date: 3/28/2024 3:01:00 AM

You are very kind with your comments Ink - thank you - rain will always inspire poetry as it is so evocative. It inexorably connects us to the natural world around us. Blessings this Easter :))