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Rainy Day Dance

The cloudy sky is painted in grays of every hue in the quiet of my room I sit alone and blue but then I hear the music of the falling rain in the beat it's tapping on my window pane It is an invitation to join its dance so free the song that it is playing is playing just for me and I can feel my spirit lifting in the breeze I see through my window blowing in the trees So I leave the shelter of my hot and lonely room to splash about in puddles and leave behind my gloom then like a little child happy in her play I dance with the raindrops on this summer day Although the sun's not shining I'm filled with golden light and everything looks lovely that comes within my sight and I will go on dancing with the falling rain splashing in the puddles just like a child again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/27/2009 5:49:00 AM
Such an expressive poem from your pen, Robin, and so enjoyed.. I remember those rainy days when I danced also.. just lovely.. to start this dreary, rainy day in New Jersey off with an excellent poem from u.. thankxxx for this uplift ... blessing s... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/6/2009 4:57:00 PM
I wanted to reply to your comment concerning the congratulation on my featured poem. Robin my granny was my saviour, when I was a child. Had it not been for her I would have grown up not knowing there was such a thing as Love. My parents were green at child rearing, and burden with making a living, for times were hard in rural Arkansas in the 40" and 50's. My granny seem to sense, now that I think about, that God had appointed her to show me what love is, she did her job well. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2009 5:14:00 AM
Robin, the sounds of raindrops falling on rooftops, windows, tents is delightful. It's another piece of nature's orchestra of sounds>>beautiful piece>>James
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Date: 9/16/2009 9:08:00 PM
Mail returned.
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Date: 9/13/2009 12:37:00 PM
marvelous journey! Light & Love
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Date: 9/11/2009 8:17:00 AM
Gosh, I love the thought of you dancing in the rain! Things must be going better for you and it makes me so happy. Such a delightful write! Love you and SO glad you returned, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2009 7:54:00 AM
Beautiful and so full of fun. Wonderful to have you back. Keep your pen flowing. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:36:00 PM
What a\positive philosophy Robin.Rgds Brian.While you have been away I have published a limited edition in covenient chapbook form of my first two years PS art/poetry blogs.If you are interested it costs 10$ US (airmailed paid)Thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 9/10/2009 9:51:00 PM
Beautiful work, i'm so glad you have returned. I miss your soulful writings...RM
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:23:00 PM
I LOVE THE RAIN! It has the same effect on me. Delightful poem, dear Robin. Thank you for sharing it and thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Lainie
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:57:00 PM
Such a delightful poem, it makes me want it to rain! (We could use some here in California) Sweet poem, Robin! Nice to have you back with us again :) ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 9/10/2009 4:15:00 PM
Nicely written and wonderfully uplifting. I can just feel the rain and the dance. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2009 3:11:00 PM
wonderful and uplifting poem, Robin. Great reminder to find the light even when it's raining! Krista
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:42:00 PM
Beautiful piece of poetry my friend..lovely use of imagery.
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Date: 9/10/2009 1:34:00 PM
I like the uplifting way you end this poem. Nice use of imagery. Glad to have you back at The Soup!!! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep your poetry coming. Karen
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