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Raindrops On My Window I turn my ear toward heaven before each day should start. Somewhere among the raindrops I listen for your heart. Keeping perfect rhythm with this heart that is my own. Listening to the raindrops makes me feel less alone. Falling soft from heaven I hear them late at night. I can almost hear you whisper everything will be alright. I wonder as I listen to the raindrops from the skies. Can you hear them falling through the teardrops in my eyes? Like lightening in the distance and the sound that thunder makes. Can you feel inside of me? And my heart as it breaks? Comfort carried in the wind with missing you so real. While raindrops on my window help my heart to heal. Cause I turn my ears toward heaven before each day should start. Somewhere among the raindrops I listen for your heart. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 8/28/2015 12:59:00 PM
ps - I am also using SONGCAT.BIZ to write a bridge for a song that I am totally stuck on, the name of the song is YOUR WALMART GIRL, and every song coach in Nashville who has heard the first demo loves it, but they all say it needs a bridge. Nothing works for me, and so I have given it to SONGCAT because I know they will get it right. You can hear the original song at YOUTUBE search vee bdosa and then YOUR WALMART GIRL HEATHER to see what I mean.
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Date: 8/28/2015 12:55:00 PM
This should make a pretty fantastic song lyric, everything fits. If you are not so musically inclined, I have used SONGCAT.BIZ to write a music instrumental track to a couple of mine, they do charge 199.00$s, per song, but then the copyright is all yours and they do a fantastic job.
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 9/1/2015 2:14:00 PM
That is AWESOME! I had no idea anything like that even existed. Thank you so very much!!
Date: 8/27/2015 5:39:00 PM
Don't let your 'ears' get sunburned!
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:07:00 PM
Beautiful, poignant write, Edwin, and only the strength of your love will temper the fact that there will always be more rain. A great poem, a 7 and a fave, thanks, Viv
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:42:00 PM
Wow! Edwin I really felt the depth of how you felt within each and every word and stanza as you listen from your beautiful words coming from your heart. xxx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/26/2015 1:44:00 PM
So sorry My page must have skipped a beat LOL. Thank you Theresa! And God bless!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/26/2015 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Mystic! You made my day! :) <3
Date: 8/26/2015 1:14:00 PM
Love it and the storyline and images are clear. Rhyme scheme works well! Well done!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 8/26/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thank you and God bless! Ed

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