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Rainbow Scales Beckon Me

Going inward Receiving moments of grace While time unfolds Touching your heart with my breath An expansion Doorways to enter Each gift revealed through my willingness Vulnerability my partner Coaxing me towards unimagined pleasure and pain Letting my mind expand Memories of days Exploring and discovering Baiting my first hook My Father’s deep voice guiding me Watching his strong hands Red wigglers in dirt Alive in a styrofoam cup We bait our hooks together Plunge our fishing poles into the pond A silent communication Connection shared Anticipation Sunlight dancing off the ripples A moment I carry with me now Always grateful for my Depth of consciousness Inhaling, I travel through time Naked, I make my way through Beckoning aqua kissed waters I look ahead and swim Allowing sunrays to bathe my body in their warmth Marbled hues sing out Bubbles rise Shadows and sunbeams in a lover’s embrace I perform a weightless somersault Smiling in delight as I catch glimpses Of the watery kingdom encompassing me Vowing to keep this sacred moment Alive in my soul forever From behind a towering coral You appear My royal rainbow Parrotfish Who I have dreamed of For an eternity Come to me dear one Show me your tapestry of glittering scales Allow me to touch your soft skin So I may delight in the magic Of all that you are Let us glide through the Nuanced waters of life Let us experience all the shades Of dark and light as one Fill our souls with laughter and love Let’s ride these undulating tides with kindness Touching the hearts of others Joining hands with those in need Creating an arena Where all will be heard Swim with me now Let’s journey forth Together my love 4/16/2023 A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1208 Poetry Contest Sponsor:Brian Strand SECOND PLACE

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/4/2023 4:36:00 AM

Good Morning Susan. Hello. I love titles and you have an excellent title to which you never strayed in your entry. This is truly wonderful poetry. Be proud of your execution and expression. And yes, the emotive factor is ever present. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. (smile)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/11/2023 6:10:00 PM

Hi dear Lisa , Thank you for your visit which brings a smile to my face ! I am so glad we could journey together ! I appreciate you .hugs and all good wishes, Susan :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/28/2023 11:27:00 AM

This doesnt just have imagery and descriptive diction, but it also flows with such poignant and heartfelt emotions that I absolutely loved reading. Made me feel so much especially the opening lines where you described your fishing trips with your father is so precious and so beautifully written. How we sometimes keep those memories so close, as thats all we have. Memories. And the ending too is evocative! I love the flow of this an impeccable write

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/2/2023 9:42:00 PM

Hi dear Ink Empress. Your presence is such a gift . Thank you for taking these journeys with me me . Everything is richer and more textured when I travel with others . I appreciate you . Looking forward to more of your magic soon ! Hugs, Susan :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/23/2023 10:46:00 AM

I must say that you my friend paint your poems as a master artist. Th imagery and motion in this creation are superb. Especially loved this--"" Let’s ride these undulating tides with kindness Touching the hearts of others Joining hands with those in need Creating an arena Where all will be heard"" A VERY FINE FAV.. God bless. TSC

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/30/2023 6:43:00 AM

Dear friend Robert, your words and comments are a gift to me . Thank you for the gift of your heart, insight and presence. I cherish them all ! I am so happy we could journey together through my poem . Humbled by your thoughts. Thank you for the Fav. Blessings to you, Susan :)

Deb M

Date: 6/26/2023 3:30:00 PM

WOW Susan….what an exceptional poem you have written full of wonderful imagery that takes the reader right there! Its so very beautiful and clever! Love it…..Debx

Susan Lawrence
Date: 7/18/2023 4:50:00 PM

Hi Deb ! Thank you ! Apologies for the tardy reply to your wonderful comments ! I appreciate your presence. Hugs , Susan :)

Michael Tor

Date: 6/14/2023 10:19:00 PM

Susan such beautiful imagery and emotion you have put into words taking the reader through wonderful experiences, and thoughts of pleasurable emotions. Loved the part of fishing with your father. You always bring out surreal emotions for the reader through your imaginative Poetic mind. Your Poetry always leaves you in a wonderful paradigm you have created for us. Thank you so much for sharing, always a pleasure to read... Hugs...

Susan Lawrence
Date: 6/16/2023 6:55:00 AM

Dear Michael , Thank you for the gift of your words . I am grateful for your presence and participation. I am happy that you could journey with me once again into surreal emotions . It’s wonderful to see you back again . I hope you are feeling much better . Each day is a gift for sure . Sending blessings and all good thoughts your way . Hugs , Susan :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/28/2023 5:24:00 AM

Susan, I am so impressed with your ability to take me on this poetic journey with you! Your beautiful words and sun-kissed imagery make it real for me, almost as though the memories were my own. Your writing style is awesome!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Susan Lawrence
Date: 6/3/2023 9:01:00 AM

Hi dear Mike ! Belated greetings ! And now happy Saturday to you ! Your words wash over me and bring a big smile to my face ! What an amazing compliment ~ almost as though the memories were my own ! Such a gift to receive you ! Big hugs xx Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2023 7:34:00 AM

A real gem this is. Big congrats for your nice placement

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/25/2023 6:07:00 AM

Andrea, Hugs thank you dear friend .

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/19/2023 8:28:00 AM

Reading your poetry reflections, dear Susan, appears like taking in an opera, a captivating, bucolic, and surreal performance. Just the name seems interesting. And truly, that's wonderful and inspirational. Susan, you really are an outstanding poetess.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/21/2023 1:22:00 PM

Dearest Sotto , Humbled by your comments. Very grateful for your presence ! It’s wonderful that we can take this journey and have these experiences together . I appreciate you . Hugs, Susan :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/11/2023 7:38:00 AM

I agree with John Watt! Very beautiful, Susan!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/12/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you dear Kim ! Happy Friday . Big hugs, Susan :)

Ann Foster

Date: 5/7/2023 12:47:00 PM

Red wigglers in dirt... my favorite line. Well done friend. Ann

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/9/2023 6:17:00 AM

Glad you liked it ! Happy for your visit dear Ann . Hugs, Susan :)

Fin Chuuk

Date: 5/4/2023 6:31:00 PM

The title alone beckon me. And wow, simply beautiful and inspiring. Susan, truth be told, you’re an amazing poet. Hugs~ Fin

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/6/2023 4:14:00 PM

Dear Fin, So happy to have you visit ...I appreciate you ! Humbled by your comments. Thank you. Hugs right back to you, Susan:)

John Watt

Date: 5/3/2023 2:55:00 PM

Dear Susan, there is something impressionistic about reading your poetic musings; something musical and magical and idyllic and dreamlike. Reality as seen through a softening filter of idealism and hopefulness. Your narrative of a memory with your Father is so touching and adds a certain gravitas as we humans look back on who we have been and forward to who we are becoming and who was there to aid us in the becoming. Your swimming sequence makes the reader feel weightless and free and one with nature. Your ideals of unity, harmony, and mutual respect always shine through everything you write, and for that I applaud you. Always such a great delight to be invited along on your treks through self-discovery and shared imagination. Light and warmth ~ John

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/6/2023 4:10:00 PM

Dear John, Your visits and in depth comments and appreciation of my work always fill me with warmth and gratitude. Thank you dear friend for bringing your open mind and heart to my life and poetry journey. I am honored to have you in the realm of light and hope and unity. Such a wonderful spirit and soul you are . Sending hugs and blessings and radiance to you .Susan :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/30/2023 5:10:00 AM

wow your are the poet of all poets, your writing is so deep and so perfectly amazing, you have matured into a wonderful poet, I love it

Susan Lawrence
Date: 5/6/2023 4:03:00 PM

Dear Mystic Rose, Your words are cherished as is your visit. In gratitude for you. Hugs, Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2023 4:59:00 PM

I see this won with Brian. WAY TO GO!!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/28/2023 2:48:00 PM

Thank you Andrea !!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/25/2023 10:47:00 AM

I enjoyed this beautifully written, enchanting poem a lot, Susan. I love the imagery-it's magical! Congratulations on your win. :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/27/2023 5:16:00 AM

Thank you dear Evelyn for your visit and wonderful response ! I am happy to see and receive you here . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/24/2023 7:58:00 PM

Rainbow scales and the watery kingdom. This reminds me of moments long ago, fishing with my father. Such wonderful memories made. I'm holding my father so close, as new moments and memories are being made every day. Your words are beautiful, sentimental and magical, all at the same time. You have such a gifted pen. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/27/2023 5:14:00 AM

Dearest Brandy , Your words delight and soothe all at once . Your essence delivered on breaths of sensuality and wisdom . I am so happy this brought up good memories of your father. Each day is certainly a gift to share with those we love. Thank you for your visit and response . Bigs hugs to you dear friend, Susan :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2023 8:01:00 AM

What an awesome poem as always, you give power to your words with a flair that few have Susan . "Let's ride these undulating tides with kindness" ... .. ...... "Inhaling I travel in time n aked, I make my way through beckoning aqua kissed waters" truly wonderful poetry. Be well Susanw. Hugs and blessings Jennifer .

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/27/2023 5:05:00 AM

Such a gift to have you visit and thank you for the wonderful heartfelt comments dear Jennifer . I am always humbled by your words . I am looking forward to reading more of your creative mind and heart soon! Big hugs and blessings to you dear . Love, Susan :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2023 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/25/2023 9:26:00 AM

Thank you dear Sara ! Happy and grateful for your visit . Have a wonderful week . Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2023 2:55:00 AM

Congratulations dear Susan on your podium finish which is very much deserved! I believe we are all vulnerable in different ways, and our life hinges on how capable we are in handling that vulnerability. Same thing applies to memories...even those have to be handled with care. It is beautiful that we can reach out to one another and share our journey on earth. ~ Warm regards & hugs, my friend. // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/20/2023 8:07:00 AM

Dear Paul, Thank you my friend. So wonderful to have you visit. I agree that our life sometimes hinges on how capable we are when handling vulnerability. Many see it as a weakness, yet it is truly a strength as well. Memories have to be handled with care too....I love your sage insights dear Paul. Big hugs and all good wishes to you and yours. Susan :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/17/2023 3:04:00 PM

Am ethereal spiritual journey. Which is a heavenly one, indeed. Stunningly creared, Susan.. Hugs..Pangie xo

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/20/2023 8:00:00 AM

Hugs to you dear Pangie. You are such a cherished presence . Sending love and all good thoughts for a beautiful day and week ahead.Susan :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/17/2023 9:42:00 AM

Susan, your beautiful poetic spirit and writing prowess shine through every word, blend into poetic enchantment in every line to create poetic magic in every stanza. I am carried along like floating on ocean waves! Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest! So fun to share the podium with you. Easter season blessings to you!!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/20/2023 7:59:00 AM

Dear Sam, A belated hug and thank you for your comments so full of joy and magic. Your presence is ever appreciated and your eloquent words sooth my soul. I am so happy we could float on ocean waves together !What an honor to share the podium with you dear one. I am back to read your poems now . What a gift to have found you here on Soup. Sending hugs and blessings to you. xx Susan :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2023 12:14:00 PM

Wow, I'm so glad I read this today: Susan, you have written poetry that affects the reader's heart and soul. There is not a single element about this that I do not adore. Totally charming, and brimming with joyous emotions. Susan, yet again, you have produced a masterpiece; a Fave for me.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/17/2023 6:37:00 AM

Dearest Sotto , Your heartfelt comments made my soul smile ! I am so very grateful for your presence and delight at my poem . Such wonderful words from you ! Thank you and thankful for the Fav ! I appreciate you . Hugs and blessings, Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/13/2023 4:29:00 PM

Dear Susan, your poem is such a great read - I always read a couple of times, and feel mesmerized! Some experiences from our past inspire amazing poetry, and your depiction of those moments shines with ethereal imagery. Thanks for sharing! Love ~ Mala

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/14/2023 1:01:00 PM

Hi dear Mala. Such a treat to have your presence. I am so happy you reread and experienced good feelings. I appreciate your mind, heart and soul and I enjoy reading your poetry ! Big hugs and all good wishes , Susan :)

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 4/13/2023 9:27:00 AM

What a wonderful read this was for me today :-) Your poem brought back memories of my own Dad taking us fishing when we were young. A truly exquisite poem Susan that touches the heart and soul of the reader. Sending out thoughts of love and kindness to all living things makes our world a better place. Hugs to you dear Susan, and thank you for visiting my page :-)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/13/2023 2:55:00 PM

Dear Anne , Such lovely words and emotions coming from you ! This brings a big smile to my face . What nice thoughts and expressions that I gratefully except . I appreciate your presence . Thank you dear Anne . So happy to have found you here . Hugs to you , Susan :)

Gary Radice

Date: 4/12/2023 1:30:00 PM

I would love to see this poem set to hand drawn animation whereby each scene morphs seemlessly into the next. Susan, see what your poetry does to my mind? :) Cheers - Gary

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/13/2023 12:22:00 PM

Dearest Gary , I love the thought of it and I love how your mind weaves and dances in words and thoughts . So grateful to have found you here on Soup ! Thank you for you ! Hugs, Susan :)