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Rain Song

Drip drop titter tatter hear the raindrops pitter patter falling faster growing fatter hit the ground splash and splatter. Prattle tattle swish and swizzle hear them make the sidewalk sizzle pitter pitter drip and drizzle falling softer start to fizzle. Drip drip drip they tap the pane drip drip drop they start to wane rush gush the gutters drain hear the music of the rain. Elelment - Water/Rain Sense - Sound/Hearing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/15/2009 12:08:00 PM
GREAT! Loved it. Not many try to depict sound in words. Excellent effort, book work! Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 2/4/2009 1:36:00 PM
wonderful rythmn and a pleasure to read..
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Date: 2/3/2009 11:41:00 AM
what a wonder sound the rain creates. loved it....alopez
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:57:00 AM
I love it...lol...it's a great one and so true. You found music in the rain..wonderful. You sure are something when it comes to words lady...thanks for sharing...Lawrence in Lou.
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Date: 1/25/2009 9:34:00 PM
Wow, this was really cool..very imaginative and the rhyme just flowed so beautifully....you invited the rain and shared it with us..It's perfect for children and adults. It's a lot of fun to read...Thank you for sharing, I can almost hear it now..Drip drop drip..LOL..Cute write, God Bless*Tyesha
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Date: 1/25/2009 3:35:00 AM
A very fun and pretty write, loved it and the rhyming! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:54:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration and rhyme for a creative poem. I like the auditory imagery. Nice job! Karen
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Date: 1/24/2009 6:30:00 PM
smile] this was a wonderful rym poetry. Enjoyed how you placed yourself as the rain and wrote this poem as you were the rain, great and creative. enjoyed reading it and have a blessed day.
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:43:00 AM
I'm singing in the rain , yes singing in the rain . What a glorious feeling , I happy .... Ooops , think uncle Gene got there before me , Robin ... Never mind ; pass the brolly ..
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:37:00 AM
Lovely Melody, Robin. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/24/2009 8:37:00 AM
this is soo lovely I really enjoyed reading it!...I love to watch the rain fall....awesome job!...Maryam
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:31:00 AM
Robin - i totally agree with Carrie - like the rain is carrying the beat - Wonderfully beautiful poetry - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:29:00 AM
This may be for children, but it is truly just as wonderful for adults! Wow! Awesome write. Almost makes me wish it was raining. Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:16:00 AM
It almost seems as if I can hear the music of your poem. Excellent job! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:15:00 AM
Great aliteration Robin it suits the pace of your poem.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 1/24/2009 7:11:00 AM
It is raining in Georgia this morning Robin and I love the rain. The sound in this piece plays lovely..I can hear the ping of each drop on the windows or bathing the house..you got my mind thinking of the sweet sounds of the rain. That means lady Robin that your piece was well done. Great job!
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Date: 1/24/2009 6:45:00 AM
Wow, how beautifully this flows, and how stunningly aural and visual. I just love this, Robin. Great write, and a great accompaniment to the rain that is falling here as I write! Love Nigel
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:17:00 AM
Very musical Robin! Neat assonance and alliteration... so well conceived and written!! Love and hugs, Keith
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Date: 1/24/2009 5:03:00 AM
OH gosh this was so fun to read Robin. And starting the day with it makes it even better. I really like it. Laurie
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