Home » Poems » Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser » ''Rain Acrostrain''

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser - Premium Member

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | + Follow Poet |

''Rain Acrostrain''

~~RAIN ~ ACROSTRAIN~~ ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; Raindrops waltz listless in heavenly grace ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; awaking flowers as they too, drink rains caress, ; ; ;; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ineffable sweetness, ephemeral: ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; nature's champagne blesses all Eden with finesse. . . _______________________________________________________________ 4:37 pm, October 26, 2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 4:35:00 PM

Olive, love the presentation of this one...complete with raindrops. Well done. congrats on the win

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Olive.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 12:52:00 PM

Olive, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Eve Roper

Date: 12/9/2015 10:35:00 PM

Great write, Olive, congratulations on you top win!!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:25:00 PM

Lovely .. so creative Olive.. the way u hv presented just awesome.. congrats on top place win!

Heather Ober

Date: 11/10/2015 10:19:00 AM

This is so creative!! I especially love that opening line. Really stunning imagery!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 8:10:00 PM

heather, thanks you for that splendid remark.. it sure made me smile.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Laura Hay

Date: 11/5/2015 10:41:00 AM

Super poem and imagery of your raindrops, well done ;) , warm regards, Laura.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/16/2015 8:07:00 PM

Laura, i thank you so much.. I love imagery in poems plus the feelings coming from the words.. =`)

James Inman

Date: 11/3/2015 8:35:00 AM

Oh, Olive. Incredible imagery, especially in the first two lines. I'm jealous, "raindrops waltz listless," and "drink rains caress," I wish I had thought of those. Beautiful!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/4/2015 12:04:00 AM

thanks much James, this a new form from formed by some of our poets here in soup and I'd grab the chance to do it and write my own.. I enjoyed writing this.. =`)~O.E.

Rainbow Promise

Date: 10/28/2015 11:18:00 AM

Nicely written. I love how you present this poem with raindrops, it emphasizes the importance of what rain does. Thanks for sharing.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/3/2015 7:25:00 AM

I want to present the rian effects too hence i pt some raindrops... =`)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2015 3:53:00 PM

not only a sweet and beautiful poem, but the LOOKS of it are great, with the raindrops you made. Wonderful, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/3/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thanks much Andie.. I just tried this.. =`)

James Fraser

Date: 10/27/2015 3:23:00 PM

Love the crafting of this little Gem Olive. The raindrops add that little touch of magic to it. Not long until we walk our rains, which in Inverness can be every season, can't wait~Hugs//James xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/3/2015 7:22:00 AM

Yes James i so want to start our lifetine journey soon.. hugs!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/26/2015 9:44:00 PM

Eye, heart and mind, you feasted them all. Brilliantly creative my friend A7... GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2015 9:33:00 PM

Robert thank you for your wonderful comment... =`) Weee I just enjoyed writing.. =`)

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/26/2015 6:40:00 PM

I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author and the passion and beauty of the words leave me refreshed as with a spring rain. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2015 8:55:00 PM

Thanks much Emile for your depth comment and poetic remark.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/26/2015 5:46:00 PM

I love your poem and creativity, Olive_eloi!!! I know of water that was turned into fine wine...yours turned into champagne!:) I predict a sure winner! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/27/2015 3:44:00 AM

Yes, I too know of that story Paul, the first miracle of Jesus in the wedding.. =`) thanks much for loving this poem.. =`) hugs! ~oLive eLoisa =`)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/26/2015 3:11:00 PM

Wow Olive this is awesome and I love the raindrops.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2015 9:02:00 PM

Tim I thank you for your kind visit and leaving a kind remark.. =`)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/26/2015 7:23:00 AM

Beautifully created in word and sketch, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thanks much Lin.. =`) I enjoyed putting into writing my thoughts... =`)