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Rain

Piter patter on the roof, Splashing puddles cuddle together, Clouds free from their burden, blessed upon for the receivers. Tumbling to the ground, undetermined path for the future. waiting and falling, With no strait away, Like tiny petals drifting down Water dancing in the air a ballet of liquids, Swooping and leaping in the air when they are done they lay to rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/16/2016 9:46:00 PM
Sounds like a good time to read a book or snuggle with a good movie. Your words paint a very vivid picture, Elissa. Great write!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 9/16/2016 9:47:00 PM
Sorry, I missed this one. I'll try harder to pay attention:)
Date: 9/8/2016 11:07:00 AM
Great imagery! It was a fun little former hurricane yesterday. :-)
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Date: 9/7/2016 2:29:00 PM
- A fine rain poem, Elissa :) - " Water dancing in the air a ballet of liquids" ... a great line - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 9/7/2016 9:45:00 PM
Thanks.

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