Rain

Rain lends an opportunity to hide A moisture that flows within the eyes Instant illusion that never was No longer we love somehow despise 10/26/15

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John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 4:45:00 PM

Nicely written Judy. Crying into the rain...

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations Judy.

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 1:19:00 PM

Judy, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:48:00 PM

Very wonderful write Judy.. congrats on great win!

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/29/2015 5:02:00 PM

A short but sweet acrostic poem. I'm glad to be back.

Judy Konos
Date: 10/29/2015 5:31:00 PM

Glad that you are back. You have been sorely missed....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2015 4:05:00 PM

very well done, dear Judy!!

Judy Konos
Date: 10/29/2015 5:32:00 PM

Ah Andreaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa good to see you....

Judy Konos
Date: 10/27/2015 4:34:00 PM

thank you Andrea...for so long I have wanted to say it sucks...so now I have said it...and I feel better! LOL...So Thanks...

Eve Roper

Date: 10/27/2015 3:13:00 PM

wonderful poem! good luck in the contest.. How are things going?

Judy Konos
Date: 10/27/2015 3:15:00 PM

hanging in there...thanks for stopping....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2015 9:12:00 AM

Drop by and visit any time. Your visits are always appreciated.

Judy Konos
Date: 10/27/2015 3:15:00 PM

Be careful what you wish for!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2015 8:31:00 AM

Or rain might create the illusion of tears thus making us see something that isn't there. I enjoyed both your picture and poem.

Judy Konos
Date: 10/27/2015 8:35:00 AM

Hello Richard....Long time no see saw....

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/27/2015 7:35:00 AM

Slightly sorrowful, but soothing. Lovely piece, Judy, good luck in the contest. Viv x

Judy Konos
Date: 10/27/2015 8:36:00 AM

It bees Viv.......thanks for stopping....

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/26/2015 6:08:00 PM

Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. The poem has a message and delivers it well. Emile.

Judy Konos
Date: 10/26/2015 6:33:00 PM

Thanks....

Constance La France

Date: 10/26/2015 8:24:00 AM

Judy, your poem is so soothing, I adore the sound of the rain, I love it 7 ~

Judy Konos
Date: 10/26/2015 8:45:00 AM

thank you ...I feel the exact same...