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Rain On paths across open meadow I once walked in soothing rain. On streets where rain filled gutters flow, Where wetted leaves shade rain soaked lane, ‘Tis there I long to walk again. 12/31/2019 For 'Writing Prompt - English Quintain Contest' By Dear Heart.

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Date: 1/19/2020 8:42:00 AM
Barry, congratulations on your win in my writing prompt challenge with this lovely poem, I love walking in the rain too _Constance
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/19/2020 10:05:00 AM
Thank you very much for my win, Dear Heart. // Barry
Date: 1/14/2020 2:15:00 PM
- A great winning poem, congratulations :) - // Anne-Lise
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/15/2020 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. // Barry
Date: 1/11/2020 4:58:00 AM
a subtle sadness is encompassed within your words Barry. This is lovely! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/11/2020 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Connie. // Barry
Date: 1/4/2020 4:11:00 AM
A good poem, very well wrote....word choice and you cleverly used them...good flow of lines....it is amazing to read.... :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 1/4/2020 7:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, Muddasar. // Barry
Date: 12/31/2019 11:41:00 AM
Very nice Barry. I enjoyed this :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/31/2019 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. // Barry
Date: 12/31/2019 10:05:00 AM
Excellent Quintain Barry, much enjoyed. :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 12/31/2019 12:50:00 PM
Thank you, Gary. // Barry

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