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Questioning why I refuse to erase a history lived passionately why Questioning myself left alone allow a river carry away my sinking feelings rush them get lost towards the stream a point of drowning due to exhaustion. Questioning my confusion why not absorb my anger visualize with glazing eyes a destination to land my soundless voice towards reality our closeness is doomed. Questioning my sobriety never impose when hope to cope dissolves Oh! twister whirl me strongly towards spring showers wet my brain a drop of water to surface intact. Answering? my confidence whispered be determined to feel when words decides choose Freedom. Therese Bacha 25 June 2013

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Date: 9/28/2013 11:34:00 PM
so good to catch you as I am going off for the night. was wondering about you since I last posted a message to you. I could see you were on the Soup tonight because I just saw you commenting to someone. So nice to see you around here. I had a nice day but gotta finally get offline. Luv, Andrea
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/29/2013 10:57:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I think I answered yo yesterday, but I see there is no message. I will write tomorrow more details. Hope u are good. Love u Terry
Date: 6/29/2013 6:40:00 PM
This is another great poemj of yours.. Your talent shows in the words you write. There is nothing like being free. Thank you and God bless..... Lucilla
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:32:00 PM
Lucy, so happy to see u here, was worried. Thank you. I am fine. Terry xoxo
Date: 6/28/2013 11:33:00 PM
Fantastic, powerful, poetic! Great work! 7! You are inspiring! Loved it!
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Date: 6/29/2013 9:33:00 PM
Hi Demetrios, thank you so much, so happy you passed by. Hope you are good. Terry xo
Date: 6/28/2013 8:17:00 PM
Lovely imagery Therese...Indeed freedom is the best thing that everyone is entitled to in life and I am glad that you chosen that path.
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Date: 6/28/2013 9:16:00 PM
HI, thank you so much for passing by. Sometimes you feel it other times you need it. Bye Terry
Date: 6/28/2013 1:22:00 AM
love your images here, Terry. and how you say to choose freedom. So good to see a new post from you. I saw that poem of yours with the pretty artwork. But could not leave a reply. I'm glad you are enjoying that space!!
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/28/2013 8:05:00 PM
Hi Andrea, miss u, hope you are better. Thank you, you are a darling as usual. see u terry
Date: 6/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
Decide to choose freedom! You are a wise lady.....terrific write! Hugs
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:13:00 PM
Yes my lady, being wise at the right moment, spares us a lot of pain. Take care Terry xo
Date: 6/27/2013 6:45:00 PM
Choose Freedom........ Oh yes Fly high Therese Just stopped by to say Hi.
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:12:00 PM
Hi Michael, hope you are doing fine, not to bored I hope. I think you are British? I try everyday to remind myself, life is beautiful, no matter what. Bye. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 6/25/2013 6:15:00 PM
Wow....this was a twister....awesome....
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:25:00 PM
Hi Donna, thank you so much. Tying to change my style. Love T. xoxo
Date: 6/25/2013 3:08:00 PM
So many questions we ask in a lifetime .and the answers we answered yesterday are different from those we answer today.Life once filled with passionate moments live only in our memory now..but tnk God for those moments lived and thank God for the changes xause everyday is a blessing even if left unnotuced...big hug dear
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:26:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, missed you, thank you for sharing. See u later. LOve Terry xoxo
Date: 6/25/2013 5:10:00 AM
Uniquely creative work that you have penned..Very expressive and emotive..Dentist and doctor's appointments today..Sara
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Therese Bacha
Date: 6/25/2013 2:38:00 PM
Hi Sara, hope you will be fine. Will stay in touch. Terry
Date: 6/24/2013 10:43:00 PM
This write has such raw emotion to it! I felt it with each line of your poem! I really enjoyed reading this amazing piece this evening! what a powerful poem, you told it so magnificently! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:08:00 PM
Hi my friend. Still awake? Here in Montreal its 1 AM......not sleepy. I am so happy you are back. You were always the first to encourage me, glad you are. Good luck with your studies. Love Terry xo

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