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Punctuationship

When I met you, I was uncertain. I kept my love behind a curtain. Upon our romance we did embark, But was I just a question mark? You were exciting. You were sure. In your feeling, you were secure. You won me, never to disappoint. Cheers, my lovely exclamation point!

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/8/2024 3:50:00 PM

enjoyed the word play in your Quatrain! Clever and creative...enjoy your evening, Sara

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2024 5:47:00 PM

Thanks - glad you liked it Sara!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2024 2:39:00 PM

sure made me smile, :-) hugs jan xx

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2024 5:47:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it Jan!

David Crandall

Date: 5/8/2024 1:37:00 PM

Glad you liked it Crystol!

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/8/2024 11:43:00 AM

Love this! :)!!! So cute!

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2024 1:38:00 PM

Glad you liked it Crystol!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 5/8/2024 9:34:00 AM

I don't see any reason why a romantic relationship can't be grammatical, as well. Good one, David.

David Crandall
Date: 5/8/2024 10:21:00 AM

Thanks Jim. As you can see, I took a page out of your book with my title, "punctuationship", having freshly read your poem about "critterature". I can assure you, I made sure everything on that page was punctuated properly.