Propitious Is Auspicious

Propitious is Auspicious --------------------------- Could it be ?, as the road doth beckon. Not likely to ever be again, I do reckon I will not likely again, know that glory. Never again be able to write that story. Of a time, when a young man’s heart turns, his soul, in transition, constantly yearns as his spirit, on fire, reaches out, it burns to the ground, nothing left, that concerns humanity, in its indifference to life, it’s journey and that road, rife with so many great adventures gone wild in the hands of Mother Nature’s child. B. J. “A” 2 May 4th 2015

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/27/2015 6:05:00 PM

With no connection to your previous writes on which your readers have commented, I find this to be a first rate composition clever couplet rhyming, flow and content. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/27/2015 7:53:00 PM

You are selling yourself short, my friend... anyone with your natural ability, recognized of not, should certainly continue to create. You have a natural flair. Keith

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 11/27/2015 7:35:00 PM

It comes from, where I know not, the words find themselves upon a piece of paper and then into type, and then onto my blog and into poetrysoup and then become part of history, never to be seen or heard of again!!! at least until some kind and thoughtful person – such as yourself – brings it back into the eyes of my consciousness . Bill . ( B. J. “A” 2 )

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 11/27/2015 7:34:00 PM

Thank you Keith Bickerstaffe., for such praise “ I find this to be a first rate composition clever couplet rhyming, flow and content. ”, “ splendid enjambments also! ” which ( at least from my ability to understand ) seems far beyond anything that I am consciously aware of or capable of . For this I am most grateful !!! Your comments give me courage to try to compose more, although it is, something I never consciously attempt !!!

Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 11/27/2015 6:06:00 PM

...splendid enjambments also!

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/7/2015 6:53:00 PM

Another sad write, sire. I feel, aside from nostalgia, a hearkening for something more substantial than what currently occupies you at the moment. Heaven knows from your previous writes you are so involved with so many things already. It suggests a desire for human contact on a deeper level with whom you currently associate with. Such a pity it turned out the way it did with the Polish Princess...(?)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/9/2015 1:58:00 PM

“ Heaven knows from your previous writes you are so involved with so many things already. ”, that is so true my Dear !!! “ It suggests a desire for human contact on a deeper level with whom you currently associate with. ” Do not we all Kim, but I am a realist, even as a dreamer. “ Such a pity it turned out the way it did with the Polish Princess...(?) ” I agree my Dear, but that is life. in fact I am soon going for a walk her as she celebrates her birthday to day. in fact Kim, I said that very thing to her ( all these wasted that was could have been great lovers ) years half an hour ago as she asked me if I got her email, related to the birthday card I made for her ( will send you a copy ) . Take good care my Dear, must get ready for the walk . B. J. “A ” 2

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/9/2015 1:58:00 PM

My Dear, Kim : “ Another sad write, sire. ”, not my intention my Dear, although I guess one can see it that way, it is just a statement of fact about the moment, but as the titles meanings state, it is about hope for all who are not living their dreams right now . “ aside from nostalgia, ” the nostalgia is about the fact that I will not be able to drive the three thousand, plus, miles across this vast land, as I have done for the past seven years, to visit with friends, old lovers and family alone the way ( the open road ) and the aside thought about a young man’s fancy. I have to say that I do not live ( the past )“ what currently occupies you at the moment. ” just live the moment sucking the life out of it and moving on to the next as you can plainly see in my facebook photos of a life in the day. Days that are spent, at times with my last two lovers, The Polish Princess and my Oriental, Exotic, Lotus Blossom .