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Progressive Rock

On the energy waves of the eons, Of lyric and line ever-forming, One is injected, transported, With all vibrations bursting Through the human heart and mind, The jolting edge of innovation And every positive passion. Even the cynic or child may sense, When riding such a current, The power native to humanity. Synapses now malfunctioning Cannot forever thwart their charge. Mankind has the voltage needed To mobilize all the connectors.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2015 12:20:00 PM
Carole...your poem jolts the "Vibs" that still "currently " " transport " through every nerve in my body....wow.. rock on...with a passion..
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Carol Mays
Date: 3/11/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thank you so much for your comments!
Date: 2/20/2015 10:43:00 AM
Hi Carol! You write with conviction and passion; energy waves and vibrations find their way to both heart and mind. Very expressive final two lines. #7 // paul
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Carol Mays
Date: 2/21/2015 9:08:00 PM
Hi, Paul. I appreciate your comments. This poem was written many years ago. I would like to get some of that conviction and passion back now! Carol
Date: 2/6/2015 2:55:00 AM
all the vibrations bursting through the ...heart and mind is what is felt on reading your beautiul write, though as a novice in poetry I'm still trying to find my way!congrats on your so beautiful verses! short but complete in meaning!
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Carol Mays
Date: 2/6/2015 9:20:00 PM
Thanks, Jaafar--That's what I try to do in writing my poems, so I very much appreciate your comments. Carol

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