Pride of Place

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Framed picture of jubilant Mom and Dad Brightens home with their smiles, constantly glad Cheering family midst trials so bad By their faith in God*, smiting being sad Against pressures that victoriously add Loving kindness for togetherness-clad Abode, place of pride which our lass and lad Claim as legacy of Grand Mom and Dad. *Mark 11:22 And Jesus answering saith unto them, Have faith in God. February 2, 2022 1st place, "Pride of Place" Monorhyme Poetry Writing Premier Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward; judged on 2/9/2022.

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/12/2022 5:59:00 AM

This is fabulous my dear friend Beata. Congratulations for a well-deserved trophy win and this superb poem. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

John Watt

Date: 2/12/2022 12:19:00 AM

A lovely tribute to your Mom and Dad, and acknowledgment of their faith in God that helped them overcome every trial and tribulation. Thank you for sharing, and congratulations of your #1 win. Grace and peace, John

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/11/2022 10:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your trophy win Beata. This is an amazing tribute to "Grand mom and dad" and all that they experienced in their life together along with the ways they continue to bless and encourage all of your family. Sending you blessings of joy!