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Pride of Ephraim

"a Didactic Tanka" bright were the arrows, struck the pride of Ephraim. Ephraim harlot… `pride she stood, as city’s queen, `pride’s econ, icon no more. For Carolyn A Contest: Remembering 9/11 My heart goes out for the sake of innocent lives lost in this inferno. In no way, is my verse meant to be insensitive to this tragedy of innocent lives lost. I just want to write about the higher precept reason, misunderstood, behind the game and not the end human concept stress. Love's energy policy must be balanced it has damages imposed in the economics of the human concept of greed. It is only that I think this game to be fulfillment of biblical prophecy. Read in Jeremiah Chapter 51:11-14 kjv to justify the prediction of which I speak. The world monetary policy led by America is the image of a prostitute.(c kjv Rev. Chapter 17&18) This economy as is must be destroyed. (Rev. 17:16-18)

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Date: 9/15/2011 7:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this different and faith based work..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:56:00 PM
Hi Moses, I loved this didactic tanka and was familiar with your background scriptures. Wonderful angle for an entry. I knew she would just love it! Congrats to you, poet friend. Thank u also for sponsoring such a fun alliteration contest. My very first 1st place win. Sweet..! Enjoying your poetry this evening, Gwendolen
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats John my friend on a wonderful win.. always Michael
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:54:00 PM
Many congratulations to you, John : )
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:49:00 AM
Kudos on your win in Carolyns contest John.
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:26:00 AM
My favorite line..."bright were the arrows" really command the readers attention as you set the scene my friend. Excellent! Congratulations on your 2nd Place Win. CR
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done. Lee
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:11:00 AM
a great joy to read this again, moe...sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John! Kim
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, John
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:01:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful win with this excellent expression of that horrific day .. my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:52:00 PM
John congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:46:00 PM
John, I do believe the terrorists saw the World Trade Center as an icon of greed. Your entry is unique and thought-provoking with a different point of view. Congratulations on your second-place win! Love, carolyn
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