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Prelude To the Night

Prelude to the Night DULCET words were WHISPERED in an ELOQUENT fashion With all the SPLENDOR that was due such action. The LAVENDER was LILTING to and fro- FRAGRANCE WAFTING to her nose. Wilting with rhythm of word and wain the Lady would TRANQUIL and BLISSFUL remain. Their romance hidden from our sight. Something they would share that night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/19/2010 5:20:00 AM
Good use of the words Congrats on the HM
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Ray. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's first contest Ray. A very creative poem! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/18/2010 10:25:00 AM
Sounds like love to me. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 4/18/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Ray on your HM in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and nice use of her beautiful words... hope u will enter one of my contests also..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 7:50:00 AM
Good job Ray. Congragulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:24:00 AM
congratulations for being in the winner circle with your delightful little poem, RAy. It was my first concert and I appreciate your having participated. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/14/2010 9:43:00 AM
very very charming! Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2010 9:43:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/14/2010 7:52:00 AM
This is a beautiful, simply said, love poem! Nicely done, Ray!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/13/2010 9:11:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. A fine prelude
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