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Powerful Shower

It's difficult for anything to grow in completely dry ground hard earth crusted over gritty like sandpaper abrasive yet crumbling at mere touch unable to hold together or support weight Yet rain doesn't always help that much when it's too hard or too fast or not long enough to last The best help of all is a gentle sprinkle now and then or a slow steady shower to soak things in Our minds are made like that, too ideas carefully firmly planted can't take root in dry destitution Even ideas of the hardiest constitution will wither away and decay in our brains without that simple life-giving rain a gentle shower of information knowledge truly is power

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Date: 12/28/2018 5:52:00 PM
So simultaneously gentle and strong, so glad I found this among your gems, my friend!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/29/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Date: 12/7/2018 5:59:00 AM
Beautifully penned, flows smoothly and speaks the truth. I had to "fav" this one, as I want to be able to read it again and again.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/7/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much! It is always such an honor to have a poem FAVed!! ;)
Date: 12/6/2018 6:31:00 PM
wonderful anology you did. I sure enjoyed this,
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/6/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you- I'm so glad! ;)
Date: 12/5/2018 2:10:00 PM
Well done! I hope all the soupers bad-mouthing each other can understand it! Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/14/2018 4:54:00 AM
If (or when) you see more of those bad-mouthing 'Soupers... feel free to direct them to my article on the subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/article/dont_be_a_poem-panner!-1988
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/5/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! (It's so sad that people are creating that kind of environment here...) Aloha!
Date: 12/5/2018 6:22:00 AM
A lovely write my friend...showers are needed outside and within...love & light...^WW^
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/5/2018 6:43:00 AM
Very true... thank you, my friend! ;)

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