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One day for sure our life must end as we depart from foe or friend, from pain or strife, despair or joy our body just a broken toy. While friends all weep and foes rejoice will we then listen to their voice and wonder why we are not dead but still can hear the things they said. It's then that we at last will find the I that's me is just our mind, the living body that we bore was just the earthly cloak we wore. One day for sure we'll know indeed the fruits we'll bear from living's seed and join with minds just like our own alas, not all are welcomed home. If we have lived a life of hate then death will take us through a gate where we'll reside with those we find have naught but hate within their mind. But if we've played a loving hand we'll then enjoy this promised land to live again as we pass through with those who are still kind and true. One day for sure our life must end but only on this earth my friend, how we live now will guide the way to where at last we’ll get to stay! Ivor G Davies

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Date: 2/2/2016 6:44:00 PM
Excellent write on the Eternal Question, Check Stanza3 Line4 for typo. Did you mean 'earthly' ? Cheers, SuZ
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Ivor Davies
Date: 2/3/2016 4:07:00 AM
Suzanne, thank you sometimes it is impossible to spot your own mistakes! I have corrected this and also removed the duplicated word as on reading it it seemed to clash and interupt tne flow. Thanks again, Ivor
Date: 2/2/2016 6:02:00 PM
Outstanding writing, very inspirational.
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Ivor Davies
Date: 2/2/2016 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Stuart, only just wrote this before posting so it was my latest work. I am currently trying to catch up on posting work I have written while not being regular on Soup but it's always good to post a new one.

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