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Like the pompous pied piper leading the way, chirping his tune of a dawning new day, frustrations were championed, oh how we followed, the ego stuffed shirt of a suit cold and hollow. From the top of the hill, he showed us the view, convincing our eyes it was harshly askew. Nearing the cliffs as if caught in a spell, he fed us like lambs from his poisonous well. Touting sweet taste of his truth well embittered, ignoring the signs of nonsensical twitter, rot with the smell of the nations decay, we drank from his cup of a water so gray. Watching and waiting for gifts of his gruel, the masses assured we were not made a fool, his promise of greatness was all we could see, with great expectations of how it would be. There's no turning back once we swore the man in, believing bright futures were soon to begin, blinding frustration gave evil its day for the pompous pied piper to lead us astray. He led us to thinking, all driven by fear, then gave his directives so cryptically clear, stripping the values by which we would stand before the American dream had been banned. Addicted to all the attention and glory, swiftly he moved to remain the top story, insisting on walls made of concrete and steel built by the anger and hate we should feel. Then some were shaken, disrupting his spell and found he was stealing our Liberty Bell. The fog began lifting and soon we would see the piper exposed as the fraud he would be. Time has a way, proven over again, of playing its imminent part. The shedding of light upon every mans soul, exposing his darkness of heart. No longer seduced by the piping we hear, choosing to see through the veil, Democracy once again fights to survive, let us all pray we prevail LET’S PUT THE SCUM BAG IN JAIL! ~Jeannie Cronin

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Date: 8/2/2022 11:24:00 AM
I do wish he had, "led us to thinking" whereas people have let him do their thinking for them! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/3/2022 11:02:00 AM
Right, again! Aloha!
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 8/2/2022 12:29:00 PM
One would think the people would have chosen someone smarter, or at least smarter than themselves. It’s gonna be a long, long climb out of this “shit hole”. The Trump stink is impossible to go nose blind to.
Date: 8/1/2022 3:21:00 PM
Great couples and metaphors. Liked this alot
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 8/1/2022 3:27:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 8/1/2022 11:42:00 AM
Jeannie, you threw it down on this one. Fabulous Stuff. Keep rolling, Stay Creative. Howard
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 8/1/2022 12:01:00 PM
Hi Howard, yeah, I guess you don’t have to ask how I really feel, right? Thanks for the comment.

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